aw im almost crying that was so sweet. i loved it, instant fav

Aww! That was too cute! I loved Shikamaru and Temari in this one. :) I loved the idea of Shikamaru helping her release her hair. It was too cute for words. :) Good job.

i loved this story! Loverly, you can write awesome stories!

aw thats so cute!! keep up the good work!! *click*

Hehe. So cute. It's really soft and pretty. I like it.
~Jenni~

roxas-kh, I loved the vulnerable side of Temari you portrayed in this story (I'm sure she does have it in her to be this way, and I didn't find her too OOC or the story too fluffy. The tenderness, uncertainty and impulse of a budding new relationship have been well portrayed here.

I thought you did a great job justifying both Shikamaru and Temari's actions, making the progression in their relationship very realistic. Nice work; thank you for writing this story!

Hey - good story - I didn't think it was too fluffy at all - very sweet and sincere but not overly fluffy. And I didn't find Temari OOC, either - just 'quiet' as you described her - it was a very contemplative moment for them both and you portrayed that well.

beautiful.They were so sweet^^I loved it so much!!

that was very good i liked it a lot

So cute
It's true!
When you sleep with ur hair up, it really does hurt.
Shikaxteama forver

This is freakin amazing. I love it and I love you for writing it.