 Smile Life Away 2009-11-30 . chapter 1I liked it...thanks for writing |
 Flickerphile 2009-11-24 . chapter 1Well written with sound plot. Good job. |
 AllegroAssai 2009-10-14 . chapter 1That was beautifully written, thanks for sharing. |
 bookwormofmassiveproportions 2009-09-20 . chapter 1Very sad, and the twist that you threw in, with it being Daphne's funeral was well handled. Nice job. |
 Julia Claire 2009-09-12 . chapter 1I liked this story. It was sad, but well-written.
-Julia |
 opaque-girl 2009-09-11 . chapter 1I wish it was more Draco/Astoria u knoe how he choose her over her sister or something but i liked id!! |
 Rachie81 2009-08-24 . chapter 1This story was really good and i don't often read one-shots but thx it was grate
XO |
 err...anonymous? 2009-08-11 . chapter 1 Nicely written. I love the way you capture Astoria's regrets while also showing that she's unable to find anything positive to say about Daphne or even a tear to shed. The only thing that bothered me, though, was that you described the times when Draco didn't notice Astoria, but all of a sudden, they're married, and we have no idea what happened in between. Either way, great fic. |
 Farzana 2009-08-10 . chapter 1 wow, that was a nice drabble. i like the way you portrayed astoria here. i appreciate the way you worded your sentences. good job. |
 done.with.marblesxx 2009-08-06 . chapter 1Interesting story. I don't think I ever realized Astoria & Daphne were related... >.> |
 El Betso 2009-08-04 . chapter 1That was really beautiful I especially loved the line "He was beautiful in the way that only a man just beyond her reach could be." |
 limecottage 2009-08-04 . chapter 1This was such a refreshing read, I love the way you portrayed Astoria, of whom we know so little about, and her relationship with her sister.
A very nice read, thanks for sharing! |
 Anachronistic Anglophile 2009-07-20 . chapter 1This was a lovely piece. I guess you chose the title from Les Miserables? I never thought about how pertinent that song was to the end of the war. Good job. |
 I Dance Alone 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Oh my, this is wonderfully written! Lovely job, you are a very talented author!
~Rae |
 Espoir Noir 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Aw..The regret in this piece comes across really clearly, but at the same time is beautifully understated. I like that you made Astoria a Ravenclaw, and I love the line "He was beautiful in the way that only a man just beyond her reach could be". However, I would have liked to have had more exlpanation of why she loved Draco, apart from that he was 'forbidden' and how he finally noticed her. But overall, a well written piece. Well done! |