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Smile Life Away
2009-11-30 . chapter 1
I liked it...thanks for writing
Flickerphile
2009-11-24 . chapter 1
Well written with sound plot. Good job.
AllegroAssai
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
That was beautifully written, thanks for sharing.
bookwormofmassiveproportions
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Very sad, and the twist that you threw in, with it being Daphne's funeral was well handled. Nice job.
Julia Claire
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
I liked this story. It was sad, but well-written.
-Julia
opaque-girl
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
I wish it was more Draco/Astoria u knoe how he choose her over her sister or something but i liked id!!
Rachie81
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
This story was really good and i don't often read one-shots but thx it was grate
XO
err...anonymous?
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Nicely written. I love the way you capture Astoria's regrets while also showing that she's unable to find anything positive to say about Daphne or even a tear to shed. The only thing that bothered me, though, was that you described the times when Draco didn't notice Astoria, but all of a sudden, they're married, and we have no idea what happened in between. Either way, great fic.
Farzana
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
wow, that was a nice drabble. i like the way you portrayed astoria here. i appreciate the way you worded your sentences. good job.
done.with.marblesxx
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Interesting story. I don't think I ever realized Astoria & Daphne were related... >.>
El Betso
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
That was really beautiful I especially loved the line "He was beautiful in the way that only a man just beyond her reach could be."
limecottage
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
This was such a refreshing read, I love the way you portrayed Astoria, of whom we know so little about, and her relationship with her sister.

A very nice read, thanks for sharing!
Anachronistic Anglophile
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
This was a lovely piece. I guess you chose the title from Les Miserables? I never thought about how pertinent that song was to the end of the war. Good job.
I Dance Alone
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
Oh my, this is wonderfully written! Lovely job, you are a very talented author!
~Rae
Espoir Noir
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
Aw..The regret in this piece comes across really clearly, but at the same time is beautifully understated. I like that you made Astoria a Ravenclaw, and I love the line "He was beautiful in the way that only a man just beyond her reach could be". However, I would have liked to have had more exlpanation of why she loved Draco, apart from that he was 'forbidden' and how he finally noticed her. But overall, a well written piece. Well done!
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