Griselda is ooc. She is generaly snaps at Charlie, Amy and Maisie.

about damn time you updated the story! it was so worth the wait!

now update your other charlie bone funny fics story!

Great start, but where are the rest of the chapters?

Where is the rest of the story?

Well, Claire, I think you should stick to Harry Potter fanfiction, but this doesn't look too bad.

I can't wait to meet this person! Please continue with this story.

Yes! That's a good story! Don't be afraid to try something new; you might like it!

Hm...a non Harry Potter story...we'll see about that...