aww...that was so sweet. good job!

This is wonderful! You've captured the best things about the characters involved perfectly. Would you ever consider doing a series of oneshots like this for the whole crew? I bet you'd do a very good job.

Aw, how sad! Yet very beautiful.
There aren't that much fics with these two starring, sadly. but you managed to capture their relationship perfectly! :D
Constantly calling each other names, cursing, swearing, but they still care for each other. Lovely!

I really like the interaction. Great job!

It's fascinating how well you've nailed Sanji's character and his relationship with Zef in this story. I just love the witty banter and what it ultimately leads up to. In a word, brilliant.

That was so adorable! I really liked it.

Oww, so sweet! I love how you write about them!

Gahh, so freaking adorable!! I love the last line, as it mirrors the episode of where Sanji left Zeff and ugh... so well written! The relationship between them is shown so clearly, and is just so pretty!! Great job, please keep on writing!

That was very well written. You built up to the ending extremely well, & you seem to have done it effortlessly! Great job.

aww that was sad V__V and yet true. I loved the interaction between Zef and Sanji--they can't really be NICE to eachother but you can still tell that they care. *_* adorable.

This is great! I loved the interaction and emotions between Sanji and Zeff, the way you were able to portray their relationship so wonderfully. It was nice to see that underneath all the gruffness and name-calling, those two really cared for each other.

Ah,, i liked this so much! You caught their characters well,and their conversation is really enjoyable and it is as if how they would really talk to each others,,it was a bit short,but you set the pace very well,,like it XD

Damn! *sniffle* This was sad and sweet. I'm all teary eyed. You just know that underneath all that bluster, they really care for each other and it's nice to see a story about it. I love how Zeff calls Sanji Eggplant. *looks about for a tissue*

Wow an excellent one shot. It captured Zeff and Sanji wonderfully. I hope there are more stories like this!

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That... just made me go "Aw" and "WHY?!". Nicely written, I want more of these kind of stories! And both characters are IC, so good job :)