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Libertyne
2009-11-19 . chapter 4
I don't do reviews often... usually because I suck at them. I just wanted to say that I hope you update soon because I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing style. Truly brilliant!
maryz
2009-11-07 . chapter 4
well.wow. I got a feeling like I was reading a real printed book,good boo at that,not a fanfiction story. LOVED IT. brilliant.keep it up. thank you.
Moonlight_Shadow09
2009-10-15 . chapter 4
It's such a lovely story. I would have loved to see the end result, but I'm assuming that the year-long gap quite pointedly states that I won't. Anyway, this last chapter ends as ambigiously as most of your stories do, so I think I can survive. =]
bananana
2009-09-19 . chapter 4
Whoa...deep. *smiley face*

Again, your stories have become increasingly more existential, (or something like that), keeping me deeply intrigued with your plot lines and the psych. development of your characters who now seem to carry more post-pubescent angst than your earlier light-hearted stories.

Am I right to feel a deja vu-ish similarity to the UK tv show "skins"? *shrugs* Don't know where I get it though...

Anyway, I still admire your talent for writing and I'm dying to read the next chapter.

DRUNK HERMIONE! *cross fingers*
Shimi Tran
2009-09-18 . chapter 4
I've always appreciated the philosophical of love and life that you incorporate into your stories. It really gives depth to the characters, unlike most stories out there that just skim the surface - the beauty of love without its moments of tragedy.

I do hope you'll finish this particular story.

Though I know how it will end, I can't help but feel unsatisfied until I see the words "fin." written by you at the end of chapter 15. =)

But anyway, creative writing aside, wish you the best in life in general.


Until the next chapter,

Shizzie
hummelchen
2009-07-28 . chapter 4
Oh I absolutly adore your writing...and I need to know that you haven“t abandon this wonderful and heart-wrenching piece of best Dramionefic,I read in a long time.
Please, please please go on as soon as you can=)
Shay Bo Bay
2009-07-04 . chapter 4
this is so good! i honestly love this story the characters are awesome and i love how you just kind of mention the war that was a huge selling point for me
this is fantastic i just wish i knew how it ends
Shay Bo Bay
2009-07-03 . chapter 2
so i was just going to rave about how much i love this story when i saw the date on the update thing
please tell me you'll get back to this PLEASE i actually like this story and its awesome i'll comment more next chapter
there will probably be tears because i will be so invested in it and know that there will be no end
flamelm
2009-06-20 . chapter 4
Your stories are what one definitely looks for in a Dramione. I simply love them, its a shame they haven't been updated in a while though. There's the caustic Draco and the know-it-all he finds annoying. The way you show him to be the know-it-all and with a very annoying personality sticks to the original portrayals(except for the wimp part but no one really wants one ) it makes the pairing more believable.
I do hope you can get back to fanfiction at the earliest.
HermioneMalfoyFan
2009-06-18 . chapter 4
Please tell me that you're still working on this story! Please! It's great, and I'd hate to hear that you abandoned it. Wow. Hope there'll be an update (soon?)...
Kean
2009-06-02 . chapter 3
Update? I just re-read it again, and I lovelovelove the intensity and how you write. I must confess I'm very intrigued by how Draco and Hermione end up together. Granger's on a rather self-destructive path with regards to her relationship with Harry, no?
AyMee.x
2009-05-25 . chapter 4
Wow, this is a really good story
seghen
2009-04-29 . chapter 4
Please update! This is an excellent story, I've recently redipped back into the pool of fanfiction and I've got to say the vast majority of what I've been reading had been completely and utterly disappointing, but this really is something. You have a real talent, and I hope you continue. I could be wrong, but from this point it seems as though the story is nearing it's end so PLEASE crank out another chapter. Just like it should be a sin not to love someone, it should be a sin to leave this masterpiece incomplete.
villainvalkyrie
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
i'll give you a thousand virtual cookies! please update! lol :)
The Dead Snake
2009-03-02 . chapter 4
So the smarty-pants is an idiot who smokes and drinks? What?
But I like this. Draco's his normal meanie self, and Harry's being bad when it's not his fault. And (I think you know this by now, seeing as I've said so about a billion times) I really like your writing. So yay!
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