KYAH! GO, OLD WOMAN!

Dang! I've got to update!

I love those traditional lyrics! They're very pretty! Did you make them up, or has their writer been lost to antiquity? Please write more soon!

Nicely done Rhiannon!
I look forward to seeing the next chapter!

This chapter is interesting and cool. Keep smiling. :-)

I can see where wisdom fits... the mystic who is timeless and beyond wise forcing Sarah to accept the truth about herself - which becomes wisdom once it becomes part of her.

This was very poetically written, I really enjoyed the style. It seemed different in style to what I am used to reading... much more lyrical and poetic somehow. Thanks for this. -Clare

Love it! Absolutely love it. Very much looking forward to the next three chapters.

How delightfully whimsical! I've never heard of Scarbrough Faire! Is it like a Renaissance Festival, which I've yet to be to? :'( This is wonderful! I anxiously await the next thread in your magic tapestry of fantasy! (Check me out with my poetic self! Boo-yah!) ;)

Wow! That was really good!! I loved the imagery :).

Can't wait for the others!

Update soon! :D

I love the ren-faire. I can't wait to go this year!
I can't wait to read more either, sounds great so far!

Wow that was so beautiful and smexy at the same time. I love how he just emerges from the shadows and in a kiss fulfills her dreams