 Miss Mary Sue 11/30/08 . chapter 1You had Jason down PERFECTLY. I love the "as if" phrases you added in, as if Nate had suggested burning down an orphanage, as if Nate was talking to a person holding a bomb, etc.
(And thank you for mentioning that Shane was daydreaming about Mitchie. I just really like the couple in the movie, is all :-X) |
 thesehearts.theyrace 8/21/08 . chapter 1lol
I LOVE JASON IN THIS!
“We’re in a freaking limo, man!”
"Maybe it was the fact that he said it perfectly cheerily, and with that sweet, innocent smile, that made it all the more creepy. But, two days later, Jason found two completed birdhouses on the step in front of his door."
and, of course.
“Look, just calm down, Jas, okay?” Nate said slowly, holding his arms out, palms forward, and speaking gently, as if dealing with a man with a bomb.
hahahaha
this seriously just made my day. i was laughing go hard my parents were just like 'wtf?'
haha |