Good job! I really liked this story for a number of reasons. First is that it didn't have any swearing. That was amazing.

I also liked the story line. You fit the Cartwrights personalities.

On a side note though, the story lacked detail. It would have been better if you put a little bit more detailed.

But over all I think it was a great story! Keep up the good work.

Very good-please finish soon!! Can't wait for the rest of it!!

I am a huge Boannza fan, and I already love this fanfic. Please finish it!

A very interesting beginning. Seems like Nate doesn't even expect the ransom to be met. I wonder what his real motive is? Looking forward to the next chapter, so don't take too long!