I Like It! It's Seductive! :P
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HAHA!! Cute ^^

I don't think Alice would remember what cherries tasted like. She has no memory of being human. Otherwise I like this. Pretty hot.

Hey Hey, this was nice,thanks for that little update, I quite liked it, Cheers A

god good!

more please :D

You have to update the next chapter !
I hope you'll update soon.

hahah i loved it! and your bella is all kinds of awesome xD
that was really great, thanks for sharing!

I love it!Do you gonna upload one day?

Gr8 read plz continue :3

This must be more than just a one shot, please tell me you are writing more!

More PLEASE!

aw, i loved that.
amazing.. and so very believable..
you got bella and alice perfectly in character too.

i will never look at cherries the same way again.. *smirk*

awesome!
i really wondering what the cherries are going to be for ;]
please update soon!

no complaining from me. :) This was really entertaining.

Not bad (it's kind of funny how Alice and Bella's roles seem almost reversed), though I'm surprised Edward didn't pick up on Alice's thoughts...
You should definitely write more.