A great story. Very good.

This is really good, please keep writing

Very interesting, I like your idea/story a lot. I'm in the same boat as you are in terms of knowing the universe, so I really admire you for being brave and posting. Please write more!

Wow. Really nice story so far...I was a little confused as to the story line...if you haven't heard, in Ep 2, Amidala and Anakin are supposed to be/get married...but if you had planned on having it this way, it's a cool twist, and very creative. Keep writing!