This fic was so sweet. It liked it immensely. Thanks for writing it.

My, but this story was sweet. You captured Riza's personality quite well, I feel. Nice work.

'“I went to say hello to Maes.”'--Ouch. Good line, it really makes the reader wince with sympathy for Mustang. I like the ending of the fic, too; it's realistic for the characters, but still hopeful in its own, bittersweet way.