This was so sweet :D and, can I just say, it also contains one of the hottest boylove scenes I have ever read. And I've read a LOT.

I really like this story so far.

ah! I liked it!

and I was just thinking, it seems like being Scorpius and telling Draco that you're gay seems way easier than being Draco and telling Lucius you're gay...just a thought...

A few typos and awkward line breaks, but generally, it was believable. The end seemed abrupt and incomplete, though, like you either got lazy or lost the focus of the story.

You began with Scorpius so eager to get the internship, then in the last chapter, he seemed to have lost interest, unless I missed something completely. Since I thought that was the story's central plot, I was confused.

Wow, this is really one of the most well written Albus Scorp fics that I've read. Thank you for posting, it's lovely, and I'd wish you'd write more of them. I feel like you nailed their relationship, and when I was reading the dialouge, all I could think was "this is exactly what a horny 16 year old would say."

Sorry I didn't review the other chapters but I just kept reading without even thinking of pausing!!I loved this fic!I liked the fact that your Albus was so much different than Harry(and of course simply for the fact that his was is Slytherin)...Can I take a gues at something?I got the feeling that you must not like Harry very much lol!I laughed so hard at the part where he was scratching his ankle!!The sex scene was unbelievable!Hot and funny and strangely realistic!It's a pitty that there are not enough ASS(I couldn't resist) shippers out there because your fic deserves more attention!Great job all in all XD

Very haunting and believable; a joy to read.

I like the idea and I like what you made out of these characters. It was interesting. The last few chapters seem kinda jumpy and abrupt like it went from one thing to another a little too quickly. I liked how realistic Scorpius was, especially concerning not wanting to break up with Cecilia. But again, everything just jumped around a little too quickly. Also, there are still a lot of questions left unanswered with this ending. You're a talented writer, just try to take things a little slower. Develop a little more. That's all. Good job though!

Well written :-) Good story, coherent characterization, plausible dialogue and description of emotions, though Malfoy sen. accepting his son's sexuality like that did seem a bit ooc to me. If you didn't want to go to lengths describing it, maybe it would be better to end the story before that.
The last two chapters do have several typos, maybe you could go over them once more and fix them, that'd be great.
Also, hot making out/sex scene ;-) I liked the more realistic moments there, such as the fingers that tasted awful.

Gawd, Scorp and Al are hilarious here! XD

Aw... That was great! The ending felt slightly abrupt. Will there be a sequel? (Harry and Draco forever) ~Alora~

Ack! It's over! What a great fic. I was somewhat surprised (yet, delighted) about the happy ending. Realistic characters, interesting side story, excellent smut...What more can a reader ask for? Awesome. :)

Yay! I've been checking my alerts hoping for this and was thrilled when I saw it today. You've made me fall in love with these two and it was a wonderful story! Well done and thanks for sharing it.

sad it's over...i liked it

god the sex scene was hilarious..and it sounds like it might actually be plausible and not fake like most other ones lol