Magnificently well done second person perspective.
Though the vocabulary is simple, it makes the story all the more endearing and the ending is simply perfect.
Good job!

Well I didn't have any doubts that the pairing would be bad, and it certainly exceeded my expectations. Its interesting that no one has tried this before though, considering the two similarities you pointed out between them.

Aw... that was so bittersweet and cute and GAH! I adored it, okay? :3 I might just start shipping Darkrai/Deoxys now...

Wow... Unusual pairing, but I still loved it! Still was pretty sweet...

Na!

-cries-

That... was... awesome! :D It was so sad... I loved the writing style in this, and the 2nd person fit very well! :3

You know, I think I love DarkraixDeoxys now, thanks to this oneshot! :D Awesome job, SH!

Aw! 8D

I've been waiting for this - the DarkraixDeoxys pairing seems interesting, and you pulled it off perfectly. You did an excellent job with pouring out their emotions; I can really feel their pain, and their comfort in each other as well.

Nice job with this, my buddy! :D

-hugs you-

That was so awesome that I'm going to invent a new word for it, um... it was AWCUFOME!

Also, I kept picturing Mewtwo being the speaker. Weird...

Attila

Aww, that makes me feel sad...but at least they can share the burden together, and it brought them together too! Aww...I can't stop doing that! (smacks self) GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF, DL!

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AW!

Lots of dragon-y love (and 'aww'ing!),
~DL ('Dragon Lover')

Hey! Deoxys!

Actually, that was pretty good. There's been a lot of Legendary shipings around here lately, and this is one that I like. (Now...that I just read it...if that makes any sense.)

Anyway, good job. I enjoyed the second person POV. that was interesting.

~The Laughing Man,
Blake

Wow, this is a great story. Kinda made me feel a little depressed. Keep it up! XD!

~Pikachu247