I'm really bad at reviewing lately sorry. It was still a great chapter really cool way to execute the plan. I'd make this longer but got things to do sorry, just wanted to force myself to write this review, even if alittle one.

-Frey

great story. keep it up!

Excellent chapter.

So, that was how they executed the plan, the problem is the repercussions I suspect are yet to fall.

I look forwards to seeing what happens next...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

So Squall's really going to leave Balamb? What would they do without him?
And you think you could get ride of a password just in smashing the screen? Don't work that way...I know I've tried once... ;p
And when will Seifer come back into view? not that I want him to return...or maybe to be kicked by Squall very very hard!!
I think you'll manage to keep this story going for still a whole of chapters. Or I hope so...
Well I stop babbling.
hope to heard from you soon!

Very good chapter its getting pretty interesting in this political sense. Where Squall's alligence is like switching and stuff all very cool. Can't wait for another update, sorry this review wasn't longer but im sure you'll be okay.

-Frey

Wow... Nice :D I loved that chapter. It was definitely nice, how Rinoa played a huge part in all of that :D I can tell something is going to happen with their relationship soon, so I'm very interested to see where this will go.

I can't believe all of their problems were just solved just like that :D I can't wait for Selphie and Irvine (I think that's his name?) to come back into the story and possibly Seifer too - but that's kind of a stretch.

Lol... At least Rinoa's dad cares enough to go and get her... Though I can only guess that he's probably seriously going to be angry with her :D I can feel quite a few different things about to rise here, and I'm really excited to see what they are. You must udpate soon! You're a very excellent writer, and I can't wait to hear more :D

-zesty-

New reader here, and I must say, it's all very intriguing so far!
I like the way you portray Squall and Rinoa, highlighting their differences. Especially their different thoughts about the internet connection. With Rinoa being glad she can chat with Selphie, and Squall thinking about the communication channels opening up (that was at least how I preceved it ...)

Anyways, great job so far!! Don't wait too long to update!

Wow!! So Squall works for Galbadia now? for the bad guys? And I definitely can't guess where your story will go. And you could try making longer scenes of action (even if you find it difficult) they're SeeDs after all! And there're soldiers (well not anymore...)
Well, its just my opinion ^^
And Yippee for the quick update!!

Excellent chapter.

Some unexpected developments this time, and not only that but some greater woes for them to deal with.

Despite the fact that they have averted the crisis, it makes you wonder if they have created another. But at least for the moment we have to wait and see what happens between Squall and Rinoa once this is fiasco is over.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

That is indeed a good question... But now is the world to fear a sea monster? Sea monster(s)? At least the soldiers evacuated but, will that be the end of it, what's squall going to do, Selph really going to galbadia to be near Irvine... What in the world is Squall going to teach? ACHK... I guess I have to wait.

Excellent chapter.

I do feel sorry for Squall, the tool that all of this is taking upon him, not simply the petie vengeance of Cid in making him go there but also the more far reachinfg repercussions of what he is being made to do.

Still, Rionoa is the daughter of a General, and perhaps that could swing the balance, but how would he feel knowing that he had to rely on her for that?

It seems that they are caught up in a bad situation, the only question is how exactly can they find a way out...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

It's good to see an update.

:) thanks for the new chapter ! I don't want to sound like I complain ( especially knowing you had difficulties writing it ) but I'm not quite sure what to think about it...

I guess I can see Squall reasoning but I think his reaction is exagerated. he is only 17 / 18 and he acts as if his life is over just because he cannot be a teacher at GGU anymore ?
It's not as if there was nothing else he could do... I mean, if the guy is smart enough to be commander at 17, he should be able to find a job anywhere, even if it's not in the military, no ?

But I'm sure you already thought about it and you have a solution I cannot find yet ;) So I'll trust you and wait for the rest of the story :)

beside that, I like your descriptions again, how tired he looks, their reactions... well done.

P.S: November is the release of robbie williams new album ! three months !

Youhou! A new chapter!! And a good one! I wouldn't have guessed Squall applied at Galbadia. It makes sense since he's not the kind to resign without a plan, is he?
Anyway now I don't see what will happen! Will Squall stay at Balamb? Go to Galbadia? Return to Esthar? Will there be new character (like Edea for example)? And when the ** Seifer will come back? And what for? I can't guess anything >_<
just that things will be even more messed up.
This promises some fun!!
I stop here, this review is too long, as usual ^^
Keep it up!!

Squall near his breaking point? that's never generally pretty. hm... At least Rin's shown up now, and he talked, at least a bit. And it is funny that Squall screwed himself over when Rin's starting to get her life together... Can't wait for more updates!