that was a good one :)

I enjoyed it very much

It really has been one of the best fanfic I have read. Veryy well written and great imagination. Keep Writting! :-)

Hi,
I have really enjoyed your fic, although I am not English speaker I could still notice your writing is really good, and the characters were really fitting with the anime's.
Thank you so much for this !
I wish it was not over yet :D

Just a few remarks though:
considering Japan's culture, I don't think people, especially 'older couples', would kiss passionately in the street (as in the beginning of your first chapter).
Plus, especially in Tokyo, it is almost sure that a 18 years old girl can't afford an appartment with... rooms!(even if the building is old). It would seem more appropriate to me that her appartment should have only one room with a desk/table and couch/bed, and a small bathroom (which would still be awesome!)

Hot and heavy! Those poor kids deserve a little actions.

Yay second chapter! This was a fun read. =-)

Hmm, not a bad continuation. Frankly not as good as the first chapter, but that's a high standard to live up to. And actually, the only real problem is the argument between Momiji and Kusanagi that was added to last chapter; it just feels rather contrived.

Once again, it's great to see your handling of the characters. I wish that we could have seen more of the cast besides Momiji and Kusanagi, but that's primarily because you do so well with them all. And at least we get a look at Sakura this time; I enjoyed her brief appearance.

The best of this is the interactions between our two protagonists, though. The very quiet way the interact with each other - sometimes the quiet of awkwardness, sometimes the quiet of unspoken sentiments - is well done. I particularly liked their little discussion of living alone, how they share their feelings with each other without asking for pity.

I do wonder, though, why Momiji isn't worried about where Kusanagi might have gotten the money for a silver bracelet. It would be surprising to learn that he's been holding a steady job. By the way, you have a couple typos: "he spook first" and "he might of mentioned it."

Anyway, glad to see more work from you! Would probably have enjoyed a new story more than an extension of this one, but it's certainly better than nothing.

I really enjoyed this!

Well, this is fairly exceptional. There are a couple minor issues, such as the use of Japanese words in dialogue(though you do show more restraint with that habit than many Blue Seed writers), but all in all this is everything Blue Seed fans could hope for as a follow-up to Blue Seed 2. The story picks up naturally from where Episode 3 left off, the characters are all portrayed honestly and loyally, and the continuation(and in some cases, resolution) of the threads introduced in Blue Seed 2 is both believable and satisfying.

I have to say, the way you've drawn the characters' mannerisms, gestures, and dialogue irresistibly brought to my mind images of the story playing out in anime form. You really have hit on all of the characters' personal traits and quirks. In fact, if I have any major complaint, it's that a few bits are _too_ familiar, like re-takes of old scenes from the anime itself. For instance, I'm positive that the opening scene is near identical to one I saw on the show. However, you have enough original moments to smooth that over.

Kome's advice on seducing a man is terrific, fitting right in with her character, and there's plenty of giggles to be had in imagining her working those techniques on Yeagashi. The subsequent lesson in kissing is amusing as well.

I also enjoyed Kusanagi's interactions with Yeagashi. I don't think those two ever met one-on-one in the animes(and I know they didn't in the comic or the video game), and the way you had them relate felt spot-on. The awkwardness between Momiji and Kusanagi towards the end is pretty original as well; I like Kome's comment, "Kusanagi and Momiji are in there… it was just creepy." Glad that you didn't make it easy for them - after all, it never has been before.

Just a couple minor problems with the writing: (1)"...and smiling sweetly she pecked her on the cheek." Who did Momiji peck on the cheek? (2)"...smiling as if this new technology." The end of that sentence seems to be missing.

This is by far the best Blue Seed fic in well over a year... Oh wait, it's nearly the _only_ Blue Seed fic in well over a year. Regardless, it's wonderful to read a new fic in this section that actually treats the characters with respect, and so I must insist that you write more Blue Seed tales. And I vote "no" to the suggestion of a continuation; Momiji and Kusanagi are best without the flavor of lemon. Thank you very much for giving us this much-needed Blue Seed fix!

You have GOT to continue! I absolutely loved this fic! It's so well written, I loved the canon. You know, I always loved Momiji and Koume's sisterly relationship, it seemed perfect that Momiji would ask her for advice. I also loved the Koume/Yaegashi shipping, but that's just me. Fantastic fic overall, great job! *Adds to favorite authors list*

What, I missed the 2nd chapter!

Hey I do hope you continue I really like your story. I need another Blue Seed Fix.

thank you,
Gally619

okay i don't really do begging, but this chapter was just way to damn interesting and good, to just end it there. I mean I don't just give people compliments to get something I want. it's really good, so please if u could continue it a little that would be great, please. ^-^