NO THATS NOT HOW IS SUPPOSED TO GO! Eve and Wall.E are in LOVE silly, THATS how is supposed to be!

OH that is soo sad! I'm happy the real movie didn't end like that. I would have been in tears! Other than being sad I liked it. Keep writing.

I am so happy the movie didn't end like that. Honestly, if I knew previously that it wasn't meant for kids, I really would have believed that was going to happen. I was actually leaning closer to the screen, quietly whispering a bunch of, "No, no, no..." LOL, I'm a dork like that. Anyway, tragic one-shot, but really well done. Good job here.

So brief but poignant. Nicely written.

Short and sweet, it has the point of the story put in. And the sadness is overwhelming. We knew that they had to bring Wall-E back in the movie...but we all held our breaths to see if he would really come.
Another good work by you Miss Becky :)

For such a short story, it really has a complete feeling. I love that the story doesn't say any names, or conditions at all. Very well done. I'm not one for sad stories, but this one is great.

There is absolutely no need for this to be any longer than it is. It's like a sucker punch to the gut, fast and painful. You're left with a vaguely uneasy ache in the general vicinity of your heart.

Some things don't need to be drawn out to have an emotional kick, basically. Great work.

To be brutally honest, it could have been longer. It's shortness was it's greatest downfall, because I had no time to really get into it. Still good nonetheless. Just could have been sadder.

And longer.

Ack! This was so good, but... now I must go and read someting more cheerful. I particularly liked the moment where WALL-E saw her... but didn't SEE her, you know? ;_; Good stuff...

That was really sad...