M... I love this type of story, horror but not really horror. I think i've read this about 4 times.

Very cute. I'm taking it that's the end? Make sure you check your spelling. Glad to see you back.

Excellent update. I liked the way you changed the details on the part with the notebook.

Keep going. Your stories are wonderful.

That was so cute! Keep going! :-)

Steeleafan you need to update. First you write 5 chapters in 11 days then nothing? I'm hooked okay. You got me, I gotta know whats happening. If you don't update soon I'll never read FF again. Yeah right just update.

AH! Where is the rest?!??!! >.

Oh god! keep going. I'll help with your block if you like. PM me if you want to.

Kool!! Kinda short but I'm find with that. Please Update soon!!

so far, so good! you've painted your hero & his lady into a corner and let's see how you get them out...MUHWAH!

Aw! They are locked in a room together awesome. Hurry up gettin get back and update

Very good! What fun. Keep going!

Aw!! Lol that was funny and sweet! Update soon!!

Great!! Update soon!!

Pretty freaky! Too short though! Great cliff hanger and keep going.

You've got my interest piqued. Just watch sentence structure. The meaning in the sentences, some, is getting a little lost. I like the story, please keep going!