The end made me giggle like insane XD Loved the other 2 chapters, a bit short but very nice^^

Love it.. Are you going to continue this??

Is it getting hot in here?? ha ha.. Must read on..

OMG!! I laughed so hard that I nearly fell off my chair.. I love it.. Must read on.

OMG! This was strange...

This is a pretty good story. You should try splitting up the paragraphs...it makes it a lot easier to read. Other than that this story is really awesome and cute. :D

This is a great story...it's pretty clean compared to others i have read.

WHO-WHO!

WHOO-WHOO! Good job! I loved it!