 Wendi Triplet Mom 2009-09-25 . chapter 1I like this... but I doubt Edward would have been able to go to Seattle without going back to Forks (just to check, of course!) - I think he'd have to have done it from far away.
As others have said, if you ever would consider adding to this, I'd like to see how he reacts when Bella keeps refusing the money, and when he figures out what she did with the cash after he returns! |
 Jhs Rockerbaby 2009-08-18 . chapter 1It's so sad, and yet so lovely. I hope you write more stories. I love your style. |
 Citizen of Volterra 2009-05-29 . chapter 1That last paragraph was so touchingly sad!
I loved it! |
 zarma 2009-04-24 . chapter 1I loved reading this outtake from New Moon. I'm glad you decided to write on it. Would you consider writing more on it as Bella becomes aware of the "scholarship"? |
 aurora1983 2009-03-26 . chapter 1Very good one shot! With that being said, have you considered writing on? It would be interesting to read about how Edward reacts when Bella continually refuses to take the funds.
Thanks for sharing :-) |
 Mini Nicka 2009-01-26 . chapter 1Sad but good |
 Hawkins 2009-01-14 . chapter 1Amazing story. I wish that part of the book was included. |
 Stellarise 2009-01-05 . chapter 1wow! this was really interesting. (: |
 videomonster 2008-12-31 . chapter 1thats a goos story. kepp writting! |
 Chalger 2008-12-31 . chapter 1Great one-shot
edwards charaterization is spot on |
 Penelope BallyCastle 2008-12-15 . chapter 1O.O
*dies*
Hahaha. OMG, thats a lot of money. I want an Edward D:
I liked it ^^ |
 Becka 2008-11-01 . chapter 1 I Just Read The Outtake For These Bits - Its A Shame She Left It Out The Real Book ): But Anyway... Oh My Gosh! Its Amazing!! You Really Got Into Edwards Character. And Im Actually In Tears; No Joke. They Just Started Pouring At The End.
xx |
 NightsofTamara 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Hey, just saw this over on and I really liked it. Edward seemed very in character. Good job. |
 Kayhuahua 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Wow! The scholarship was actually one of my favorite parts of New Moon (even if it was an outtake) and it's great to see it in Edward's point of view. I love it! |