I love this story, I loved the first story, and I want more. The length of time since the last update discourages me slightly, but from reading your profile page it's apparent that you have a few things on your plate. Patience is a virtue, I suppose, and shall be exercised here.

I still want an update, though. :D

this is a good story, and i'll leave it at that.

to be honest i don't know how i should review anymore because some have showed a dislike of ppl posting our questions and thoughts in them.

bloody brillant chapter! tot. love this whole story actually. and the prequel. moving on, i really can't wait to see what happens next. update asap

woot. Can't wait till you get more chapters up. loveing the story so far. is worried about chi. Hope she and vi can have a happy endding and helen can get relaxed with chi.

ooh what a mess youtube can make for people... *sigh*
great chaps ^_^
sorry it took so long to review, been busy *shrugs*

the tension is getting thicker I see and that chapter set up a bunch of questions than answers.

the virgin Mary thing was a funny little bit odd , I don't know why it was odd but odd in a good way

love it more please

Very nice chapter. Like the fact Agency does not seem to be the evil empire. It is staffed with human beings, and some of them are real **s, but it also has good people and their point is to try and protect the larger society even if they do it imperfectly at times.

Nice job of keeping the tension going. You lousy **, you kept the tension going instead of giving us resolution. Ah well, perhaps next chapter.

After chapter with a lot of unresolved emotion the humor of the closing vignette was much appreciated.

KiY

yay I finally get a chance to read the chapter.

I loved the openingi t was funny . your openings allway are very good.

I see that other peopole are starting to rember things not just Kari.

that scne in the tank was very revaling.

I see we have another agent with a big head agin.

is this thing with Violet a new development that just put a wrinkle into a lot of peoples plans

why the heck is the you tube such a bad thing.

I, well, I don't see what's so bad about the video being on YouTube. But, you have pieces fitting nicely together, and I just need all the pieces to get it straight. Keep on trucking along, we all take time sometimes.

OMG THAT'S AMY DIAMOND AND LUCY BRADSHAW OF D.E.B.S! YAY

Nice to see this goes on, after a short hiatus; very interesting.

What are these strange new powers? Chi can see things beyond the vision of the naked eye? And now Violet's already considerable talents include some kind of mind-control/suggestion/telekinesis? How very interesting, and a little peculiar.

Speaking of peculiar, what of Chi's sudden change of heart towards Vi? From love and sacrifice to exploitation and control, was this always there or has Chi's suppressed self reared its ugly head?

That's a lot of questions, all with, I'm betting, very interesting answers.

Good for Chi being a strong woman, and not bowing to The Agency's Man. I believe the term is "Emasculate."

Yay! It's back. It's getting interesting. Can't wait for more. ^^

Loved the opening. Anyone who saw the movie knows exactly who you are writing about. (Although, anyone who knows The Incredibes strictly through fanfiction - I hear such things happen - must surely be scratching his/her head at the moment.)

Great ending, has everyone on the edges of their seats - cursing you for how long it takes between updates.

Oh yeah, the stuff in between opening and ending was good too.

KiY

More seriously, as the ** is starting to hit the fan it looks like someone at the Agency wants to make Chi the scapegoat for the mess. She strikes me as having been a very poor choice for the role.

so got to update. very well writen. cant wait to read more