 andrea-af91 2009-09-03 . chapter 6this story is really interesting :)
update soon :) |
 Emily loves Edward 2009-07-26 . chapter 6Love the story and you are doing well! I looked at this story before and loved it! I've checked for updates ever since so please update again! Have you discontinued this story? |
 VampireGirl 2009-04-30 . chapter 6 Your story rocks!
I love your plot and your writing!
Please update soon! please please! |
 laneygirl12 2009-04-08 . chapter 6Please update soon! I'm literally on the edge of my seat. I love it so far. Keep up the good work! |
 Miss Dassy 2009-03-23 . chapter 2Hey! I know i kinda back stepped on the chapters but i want to know if you'll be updating! Im getting anxious! Please continue! It's so good! |
 gilly 2009-03-12 . chapter 6 Hi, this is an excellent story. The characters are so true to the book its brillant.
Cant wait for the next chapter. |
 foosel97 2009-03-08 . chapter 6Wow...wee!
Rosalie is being mean!
But I guess I see her POV. If one of my family was in danger..
I feel sorry for Edward, but it's really interesting to see him more kind of... helpless, than Bella!
I've just noticed that my last sentence made me sound a bit sadistic~
Awesome chapter, update soon :) |
 Miss Dassy 2009-03-08 . chapter 6Awsome! This is probably the best story i read so far on fanfiction! Keep it coming!! |
 Jessica 2009-03-08 . chapter 6 I loved it. Update soon. |
 daniellerobyn 2009-03-08 . chapter 6very, very nice! quite an interesting idea you have going here... this story is definitely what i'm looking for right now. i love it! can't wait until next week to get an update! |
 Padilla 2009-03-08 . chapter 6Interesting.. Nicely DOne. :) |
 RealMenDoSparkle. 2009-03-08 . chapter 6I love this story!
Update soon,
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 Smiles4Life 2009-03-08 . chapter 6Interesting twist with the whole substance that they injected into Edward being the date-rape job. Poor Edward, being rendered helpless and defenseless.
And how dare Rosalie blame Bella and Alice, Edward!? I was glad when Carlisle yelled at them and made clear that the only people at fault is the Volturi.
And Carlisle's right... what happened to Edward during those 12 hours, which is still being told, would break any adult. But Edward, as a human, is a barely 17-year-old boy physically meaning emotionally he's going to be more traumatized and trying to understand through an adolescent's point of view, hence the tears he cried. And now he's vomiting... poor kid, his body is now rejecting the drug and whatever else is in his system like Bella and Carlisle believe. And Esme's right that the amount of drugs in his system should have caused an overdose, but Carlisle's probably right that Edward does still contain some vampirish-immune system.
Update again ASAP! This story is getting better. But, do try to make the chapters longer...
-Stacey- |
 EnglishMystic 2009-03-05 . chapter 5I really like this story, it's different. Update soon!! |
 SkaterKatie246 2009-03-01 . chapter 5Poor Edward! He's going to be in a lot of pain when he turns back! I can't wait for the rest! |