strange sich, dead damein(laughs and grins evily), great chapter.

great chapter, and start. I HATE DAMEIN!

Nurse Joy is still prejudiced against Dark types though. :(

YAY! Damien Died! YAY!_

this ones good.

That is... Good! I could actually picture the wheels turning in Nightflame's head as she realised she had 'Permission' to kill him...

damien finally died! partay! is the pokemon watcher elite four karen?

Good! At the end of Dark Battle or whatever the other one was called, it felt kind of like it was leaving me hanging...

There's enough bad stuff in the world already, so I'm glad justice could be served if only in a fanfic, a figment of one's imagination.

By the way, I am going through and reading almost every one of your stories. Ones I really really like get reviewed.

as a sequel to the other story, personally I would have kept it in 1st person point of view, which serie of books have you ever read which change the points of view? another thing, I would have included more on houndoom's thoughts upon seeing her trainer and...wasnt she a guy?

Whe! great ending! poor nightflame, no one ever listens to her, even when everything points towards what she's saying. Man, that Damien dude was a jerk-off, he deserved the death that he got. man, if ANYONE ever did any of the things those "gods" did to nightflame and wildfire to my houndour, they'd sorely regret it. Dark-types are very smart. Write more, I wanna know what happens to Nightflame_! Your great insperation, dude!

What kind of sick person would do that to a poke'mon Someone should pay for doing that.

Again, interesting, and nice concepts.

Ooh ... now I gotta go read Dark Battle. ;

Really, must this all end in violence?

But, heh, this jerk deserved it. Justice. It's just so sad that people didn't listen to Nightflame, though! If they had, it wouldn't have had to end like this...with Nightflame, though having her justice, perpetuating the cruel sterotypes about her type.

Great story. _.

Brutal, but very appropriate, ending. Poor Wildfire (right name?), poor Golduck... Guess I'll say it again; FANTASTIC ending!