great! this chapter is absolutly superb! keep goin and writin cause i am desperet to find out what happens

I love it. very original the idea of holly in love more please.

Hahahaha! That was a good chapter, I liked the dialogue! You HAVE to continue it, I wanna see what happens next! Please write more soon, you're a great writer! :D

Carly

I love it! The idea is VERY original, I haven't read any other stories like it! The characterization is really good, and the story overall is really nice! Cute story, now I have to read chapter three!

Carly

Two reviews in one day! :D You'll be sick of seeing my name soon.

"I don’t want to know what you plan on having her do with your harddrive.” - lovely, lovely line. Just perfect for the RD style!

And Rimmer's characters just so wonderfull spot-on - all snarkiness and smegheady!

I'm still finding the ideal of a Loved-Up Holly adorable. Plus this: “I handled it the same way I handle everything else...” Lister shrugged. “…with ridicule and sarcasm.” - Squee!

Keep it going! :D

“This fearsome deity knows all your weaknesses and will punish those who betray God.” - this is a very good line. I must yell it at someone during an argument.

This is quite cute. The concept of Holly falling for a human, intriguing. I'd like to see how this goes, do keep it up! :D