I am in awe. The more I read of your stories, the more in awe I am. They are so beautiful, and I don't have words for how wonderful they make me feel. Thank you for being so committed to painting such a beautiful picture of Narnia and all her inhabitants, especially our favorite brothers.
HL

I LOVE THIS STORY! It is a perfect sequel to 'Thole,' which I already love. You do a wonderful job of writing, Elecktrum!

From where the waves grow sweet,
Aslan's Breath

P.S. Do you think that you could visit my site and tell me what you think fo my fanfics that are published there? I would really love your criticism, Eleckrtum! The site address is, http://narnianlibrary. Thanks!

OMG! that was like the BEST fanfic i've everread!
Bravo!! i really cant wait for more, this was beautiful.
great job, great job.

Very very VERY beautiful. I loved it. Nothing else can describe. I'm glad that this was my first Narnia fic, and at the same time sad because I'm not sure anything else can match.
Love,
Lady Merlin

I loved the hats part! heeheehee, I'd throw mine in the river!

That was beautiful!
Luna

Much lighter than what I was expecting but no less good. I was glad to see the marriage, I look forward to the offspring. Ed didn't confront his memiories yet though. Thanks for writing!
Wildfire

Aw... that was such a sweet blessing. I love how Kanell and Xati only had eyes for each other. Also, putting Neville & Co in there was great. Are Edmund and Peter going to work through their issues in one of your stories, or is that going to be an off-screen type of thing?

Thanks for another great story. Now to the next in the series! ^_^

That was so awesome!

Where to begin... hmm. An apology would be a good start, I believe.
I am so sorry that I took so long to read and review this, good my friend. Yes, there were reasons for my absence, but still... the matter stands. My humblest apologies, dear lady.
That said, now that I have finally caught up with this beautiful chapter, I find myself almost equally as sorry to find that it is all over. This has been a wonderful read throughout, E, but this chpater may just be the very best of the whole.
Once more, I find myself awed by the sheer depth and richness that you bring to Narnia; the idea of the Oriental dryads, Edmund's choice of positioning (I half suspect that the offending footstool 'disappeared' soon after, along with a certain pair of hats!), and Susan's uprooting half the Cair's flowerbeds to decorate, just make it all feel so very real... I can see the characters clear as day in my mind.
Edmund's blessing was stunning, elegant and beautifully heart-felt; I think I felt almost as proud as the boy's family. And the final moments, with Peter finally coming back to himself (and his brother), and the pair of them just holding each other as the rain began to fall... well, it would be fair to say that more than one tear came to my eye. Well done, bravo, and thankyou.
Yours,
~MyBlueOblivion~

Aw, this is wonderful! I love the ending and I also really liked the scene when the giants came and Peter had to face his demons. And the alluding to the night where Peter had nightmares and Edmund comforted him was really nice too. Too bad we didn't get to see that scene. :) Anyways, great job! Oh, and happy holidays!

Great story! I can't believe I waited so long to read it. It was absolutely beautiful, but then again all your stories are wonderful. I love the way you portray Edmund and Peter. There's some kind of beauty in your stories that can't seem to put my finger on.
Thanks so much for doing such a great job! I look forward more of your stories in the future. :)

I have a problem, and it's all your fault. Thanks to you, I can't read any other Narnia fanfiction. While there are several extremely well written stories out there, none even come close to being as good as yours. More than anything, I think it's the way you write Peter's voice and Edmund's voice. You make them so real, anything else just pales in comparison.

Therefore, if you don't wish to be responsible for the dissolution of my already tenuous sanity, you need to write more Narnia stories, for soon I shall surely lose my mind!

Not to be too extreme or anything.

Seriously, I love your stories and your characters--I've never encountered so many OCs that I love so much, almost as much as the Original Four. I want to know what the prophecies meant in 'In the Lap of the Gods' and what's going to happen with the Ettins, and how Edmund and Peter are coping with everything. Your stories are so real, sometimes I worry about the boys like they're real people before remembering that it's just a story. You have such a gift. Please, keep writing.

Why the HELL have I not reviewed this yet?
I have no excuse. I've been reading this from the first chapter, no review. What is WRONG with me?
I'm lazy. That's my only feeble excuse, and it has no matter, here. :[
And I STILL say that you're my favorite fanfiction author.
I have nicknamed you the Goddess of all Narnian Fanfiction. Please accept it as a token of my extreme love for you and your highly original stories.
This was GREAT.
Very creative, with plenty of tragedy and angst mixed in with the love and humor.
:3
I don't really care for Peter alone by himself, but you write him so darn well he's too loveable to resist.
And of course, brother fluff and angst is all good with me. :D
I've actually gone and printed out the entire "Into the West" and "They also Serve" stories. Yeah. Over 100 pages each. Mum was not pleased at the sudden ink-loss-age...
BUT IT WAS WORTH IT.
:[
Please write more. Peterkins was so adorable. I frequently catch myself shouting "AH, BLIN!" every now and then. It produces many hilarious stares. :]
Overall, I'm very tempted to print THIS one out as well. I had an idea for another story if you'd like to hear it...
I've always wanted to see your take on Edmund's rescue from the Witch. I'm such an angst-freak, I can't get enough of it.
Maybe you could write me a little one-two-three-shot of Ed's point of veiw, as well as Oreius' and Peter's? PRETTY PLEASE?
I promise to review...D:
I mean, you gave us a small glimpse of it from Oreius in "They also Serve"...But I'd love to see it expanded...:3
Keep your pen sharp, and may the force be with you!
--Monkey

I just wanted to let you know that you have done it again. You have a brilliant way with words. As I sit in the library, crying for the depth of emotion displayed in the characters, I suddenly realize that the two girls sitting across from me are whispering quietly while casting worried glances in my direction. And I suddenly realize, I don't really care. This stroy is too good to not get wrapped up in. Now I just have to be careful to get to class on time.