ohh... I almost cry... seriously.
it was so sad for bella .. but .. it was her choise.. so she can't complain
and my jake.. he deserves all the happiness that the world has to offer.. so it's ok that he choosees to be happy (with nessie)

Great fic, and I usually hate post-BD fics (because I HATED BD), but this was very well written.

The only reason I liked BD was that in the end, Jacob was happy. But I desperately wanted Bella to pick Jacob, and it gives me some satisfaction to see you write her with so much regret. Your writing is very touching, and it gave me a lump in my throat.

I... wow. I can't think of anything to say apart from this was beautiful, perfect and exactly what would have happened ~(what should of happened if Meyer wasn't such a ball of fail).

You are brilliant, well done.

I'm glad you wrote Jacob happy. Glad he realized happiness is a choice and that he and Renesmee had the sense to move.

wow- pretty amazing :)

The farther away they get, the more he finds Jake again, all sunshine, warm soda, earth, summertime.

That was beautiful my darling.

I love this!
It's amazing, you're amazing.
If Bella had a brain in BD,
she would've thought this.
Jacob is ALWAYS the right choice.

You are made of win!
*wolfy hugs*

Wow. Really, just wow.
:) Kudos

Omg, this was amazing! As a J/B shipper (AND J/N shipper!) I really enjoyed this. I must say, I despise Bella lol... and I love that you wrote her regretting her actions, because it's completely realistic. I also love the way you describe Jacob in the last couple of sentences :) I like that he's able to finally forget her when he leaves with Renesmee. Well done!

I liked this short story. I really liked the end and how Jacob made a choice. And a smart one.

And I am so glad you made Bella have regrets. That was one of the many things I was hoping Bella would feel in BD. (I mean I am a E/B shipper and wanted Bella to be turned but I am also realistic. She should have missed somethings from her human life. It is only natural.)

Anyway, well written story :)

I like it :]

Jake is free from the love shield. Good chapter.

I loved this.
Endings where Bella is unhappy but Jacob is happy make me happy.
I really hate Bella.
And I really love Jake.

Although I am a Bella/Edward shipper, I thought this was faboulous. A great, angsty take on Bella's vampire afterlife. Poor Edward & Nessie... Bella will never be grateful, will she?
But honestly, BD was so lacking of angst, and this undoubtedly satisfied me ;)
~i