love it! dedicated twilight fan here!

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Good! Update soon i want to know what happens

The venom morphed her respiratory system which is why she still has asthma. Her eye color will be explained in due time though. So, enjoy!

Ninja's are better. All the way, no questions. But I think Emmett, being the goof ball he is, might LIKE being in Victoria's secret.

Again though, vampires don't have to breath to survive, so an asthma attack wouldn't really do anything to a vampire.

Uh... why are her eyes purple? Because she's asthmatic? Dude, having asthma sucks as a human... wait... but, vampires don't NEED to breath, so it wouldn't really EFFECT them.

i thought it was intiguing cant wait for you to do the next chapter

OMG this is some of the best stuff I’ve read in a while plz you gotta update. I’m serious this is just awesome. Feel free to check out my fics anyone you want but please drop something for me so I can improve my skills and hopefully be as good as you are.

And plz review my story "Heart of The Kingdoms" my current one and I would really appreciate it

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