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Apocrypha Blessing
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
Just found this story off of a link from DA. Wow. Very unique pairing but you did an awesome job of it!
P.A.W.07
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
Now that just blew me a away. Not only have I not even dreamt of that pairing, I can honestly say I have never seen a fanfic that centered around Cosmos. I will admit though, his character now seems a lot more intresting to me if one thinks on the issue of his innocence.

Also, perhaps you should, perhaps, put this story into the character bar selection. Cosmo doesn't even have a story under his section, and I think this would certainly be a wonderous eye opener on pairings for Cosmo fans ... if there are Cosmo fans ... hm, they might be endangered now that i think about it. :P
Byrnstar
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
...gah! Here I thought the artwork was enough to blow my comfortable little mind out of the water, but this...!

But excellent write-up of such a cracked pairing. Cosmos’ clueless but fundamentally sweet nature comes through great. Sunstreaker’s sensitivity is a bit of a surprise, but oddly enough it fits as well.

Poor minibot. He just got tossed through a whole new door...hope it doesn't wind up doing more harm than good in the long run, seeing as he's perpetually condemned to orbit...
OKami-hu
2008-09-05 . chapter 1
Man. oo That was awesome, and HAWT, and beautiful, and SO very in character. You make me want to write this kind of interfacing again instead of my trademark stickies.
Seiberwing
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
Aw, cute Cosmos. I love how his internal thought process is continually finding reasons to be genial with everyone.
Alana Hikari-Chan
2008-08-26 . chapter 1
... I, I'd leave a relevant critique or comment or review or whatever, except my brain seems to have melted. From hot. From a pairing that I'd never, ever imagine, and still don't quite understand how it turned out so awesome, except it DID and so I'm going to sit over here and babble incoherantly about how awesome this was.
EnVyS pEt NeKo2
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
That was so HOT! *crams tissues up her nose*
Akkila
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
I see where you got this idea, very detailed and cute. Everybot needs some lovin'
Thing With No Talent
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Interesting pairing, but you carried it out very well. It's always cool to see Sunstreaker doing something selfless, his reasons as inscrutable as ever.
flamingmarsh
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
this was great!
Tugera
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Ha! I've seen the pic this is based off of..? XD
Awesome. ^^

Heh, fun way for them to get together. Sunny seems so.. high up... something. Yeah.. XD
Optimus and Jazz? That's interesting...

Love that he falls asleep on top of him at the end. So cute. XD
mdnytryder
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Totally off-the-wall pairing, yet, you made it work. This was very erotic, and I enjoyed it very much.
oinvu
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
This was simply and utterly fantastic. It's so rare to see Cosmos in a fic, even as a cameo, and I'll admit, I almost passed this fic up BECAUSE he was being featured. I'm so glad I submitted to curiosity and clicked the link. :)

Wonderfully written, elegant and intelligent. Definitely an insta-fav.
Cabbitshivers
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
That was awesome! And... completely and utterly weird and a more random pairing I have yet to encounter, but so, so wonderful! Finally a Sunstreaker that I can actually appreciate. Cosmos was written wonderfully, and there was a sense of calm to the whole fic that fit the minibot so well. Bravo!

Thanks for posting!
Saberfrost
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
aw poor Cosmos, in love with someone who doesn't exactly think that way!
I can't wait to see more!
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