genius. :)

i love the original storyline. it's very very interesting! i can't wait to read the next chap!

this sounds GREAT! update soon!

ahh i love edward. good plot so far. a bit random in terms of edwards behaviour and their meeting etc etc but a little ooc never hurt anyone. update soon. x

So so good! I was seing the whole thing in my head while laughing out loud! My dad thinks I'm crazy laughing like that while i'm supposed to work!

So please update soon, can't wait to read what's happening next

Great first two chapters- very, very intriguing.

How you managed to portray Edward perfectly in only a few sentences- amazing!

You got me hooked- can't wait for the next chapter(s)!

haha thats well funny edward to save the day thats shut jessica up

damn didnt know bella had it in her

who's steve?

great chap

update soon

hilarious.

there are no words to describe how hilarious that was.

that was serious rolling on the floor, laughing my ass off, tears running down my face, hysterical laughter.

i swear this is the funniest thing i have ever read.

update soon!

Lolz, you tell 'em Bella! Yay for finally meeting sexy Eddie, can't wait to read more!

Oh I love it. That was great I was laughing as Bella was telling off Tyler in her own way. Can't wait for your next chapter! I hope you don't mind but I can sense future lemons and I am going to add you to my C2.

i love this story so far!

its not like any i've read before.

and i even found myself laughing out loud at some points.

great job.

please update soon!

x

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Hmm, looks like there is going to be a lot of drama in the beginning! I wonder when E&B are going to meet? Update soon!