|Reviews for Onions|
| Lazuli 5/19/13 . chapter 1
Too cute. It'd definitely deserve to be continued if you have nothing else to do.
| Alastor Wolfkin 6/12/11 . chapter 1
if i was uber-rich, i would pay a sh*tload of money to read the next five minutes of that conversation
| Jokerman 1/14/10 . chapter 1
What. The. F-.? It was ok until the end. Again, WTF!
| EfficientLazyness 6/29/09 . chapter 1
That's it ? another chapter perhaps ? this is a really good quality fanfic and would need a better ending ... like something that didn't leave you dangling in mid air
| yansuke 4/26/09 . chapter 1
holy s**t! now that what i call a surprise!
| Black Angel 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Speach less -mouth hunged open- so sudent but good
| Myra the Dovahkiin 10/30/08 . chapter 1
great story. keep writing. What's Temari's answer? There needs to be a sequel!
| Jakuro the German ninja 10/19/08 . chapter 1
| Hagensen 9/28/08 . chapter 1
I didn't see that it was completed, so I started reading and I must say it was good but when I reached end I was surprised that the story just ended. I can't believe it was a oneshot I mean it almost screams out sequel. Rock out!
| NX-Loveless-XN 9/5/08 . chapter 1
...It seems incomplete...but a nice story.
| the water omega 8/30/08 . chapter 1
this is funny I hope you add her reaction. hehe
| delete this acc plz 8/25/08 . chapter 1
was this a oneshot only? or is it continuing?
| King of the DamnD 8/23/08 . chapter 1
pretty good storyline but it ended way too abruptly... :X
| Halan Lore 8/23/08 . chapter 1
very... awkward ending.
But still the pancake thing was funny. And nice how Temari called Sasuke a jerk.
| spriterx 8/23/08 . chapter 1