SWEEEEEET!
Too cute. It'd definitely deserve to be continued if you have nothing else to do.

if i was uber-rich, i would pay a sh*tload of money to read the next five minutes of that conversation

What. The. F-.? It was ok until the end. Again, WTF!

That's it ? another chapter perhaps ? this is a really good quality fanfic and would need a better ending ... like something that didn't leave you dangling in mid air

holy s**t! now that what i call a surprise!

Speach less -mouth hunged open- so sudent but good

great story. keep writing. What's Temari's answer? There needs to be a sequel!

too anti-climactic

I didn't see that it was completed, so I started reading and I must say it was good but when I reached end I was surprised that the story just ended. I can't believe it was a oneshot I mean it almost screams out sequel. Rock out!

...It seems incomplete...but a nice story.

this is funny I hope you add her reaction. hehe

was this a oneshot only? or is it continuing?

pretty good storyline but it ended way too abruptly... :X

very... awkward ending.

But still the pancake thing was funny. And nice how Temari called Sasuke a jerk.

Awsome chapter:)