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Chetzahime
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
Sad but beautifull specially the part of the Cassian plan's for the future. It was very good.
morbidbirdy
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
it seemsevery timei read your work itis beautiful poetic and almost always makes me cry and sob uncontrolable. this story was PURELY BEAUTIFUL! (SOB!)
starichi
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
Two words.

Absolutely beautiful.
(PS. Sorry it wasn't a better review.. but really, I think that just about sums it up).
Sekowari
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Oh dear, this makes me so sad but satisfied at the same time~
Your writing is so flawless and the words flow ever so smoothly.
The way you tell of Cassian's reminiscence is so beautiful!
Thank you for gifting your readers with such great work ^^
And of course, for giving Jizabel a happy ending =)
Dalia N'Shard
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
It's interesting, I always thought I would cry when Jizabel finally died. But when that chapter came, I laughed. I laughed because I knew that he was finally free, that nothing could hurt him anymore.

I absolutly loved this story, it seems in my mind to emphisize the feelings I had when he died...
Sorryll
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Holy hell..

I think you just killed me. I am actually bawling my eyes out. I told myself I wouldnt cry but...the letter. I wasnt expecting a latter and then on came the waterworks!

This was absolutly, utterly, undeniably beautiful. The last sentence really got to me too. I have all these images in my mind now that makes me wish I could draw.

Darling, darling Jizabel. I'm going to pretend this actually happened and wasnt fanfiction. ^^ Woohoo, reality substitution!

Right, off we go now to listen to sad music and write my own update. Though I feel rather foolish after reading this masterpeice.
WhenPicklesFly
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
I loved this fic so much. Your wording is beautiful, and I almost cried. I love Jizabel, and I was so sad when he died. Great, great story.
flight815kitsune
2008-09-12 . chapter 1
Aw...You made me cry.
There's a few typos. Nothing major, though.
Kitsune no Tora
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful. :) It's wonderfully written, and the imagery is amazing. I absolutely love it, through and through. :D

Ah, but I want to leave a balanced review. There were quite a few typos I noticed, like "road" being spelled like "rode", inapporpriate useage of "it's & its", and a few other spelling mistakes. But that's it. :D
Syaja
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Oh my. That was a very good fanfic. It was so well written. It was very sad, I even almost started crying on some parts! Good job!
Veleda
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
I've been craving some good post-series Jezebel/Cassian, and this fits the bill. I really like the repetition, and the melancholy air worked very well.
athenaswings
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
*sniff* *sniff* nah, i don't really cry when i read but i think i was in a trance like state. and now i forgot how to do the homework that i went to the computer for(too many images of cassian and jizabel)
Boomerang
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
I read this story (I want to see your wings) and found it fgantastic. it really touched me, and I allways was a fan of Jezabel...
Savvi-Sin
2008-08-27 . chapter 1
That was so good! Except I'm crying now...Probably 'cause I'm listening to Tears and rain too...way too perfect of a song for this story. Great job!
sebastian w. melmoth
2008-08-26 . chapter 1
Godchild's fanbase IS small... but also extremely devoted.
I loved it! I very nearly burst into tears for poor Cassian.
Good, heart-wrenching fics about the aftermath are so hard to find. Wonderful! And it ends on a morbid note of... hope! Fantastic.
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