This is so true, and memorable, and believeable that I'm out of words. You're made of awesome.

Beautiful. I love how this seems so real for their world. Yet there's little bits of happiness for John in Cameron and hope for the future in every successful mission. Great fic.

This is WONDERFUL. I was excited to see your name next to a new fic, since you've authored some of my most favorite John/Cam stories. You write them, their relationship and everything that's happening around them so beautifully. You have a writing style that is poignant and effective and moving. Very impressive how smoothly and adroitly you move back and forth between past and present events (which I think is very difficult to do successfully). AND you present some interesting ideas here.

Very nicely done. I hope to see more from you soon.

This was good. I like it and it was touching as well the way you placed in the flashbacks. Good job on the writing. Hope you do another one.

This was a gr8 read, very true to how i would imagine John and Cameron's future to be like, i like the way you explained Sarah and Derek's deaths, although quick and brief it added depth to this short fic ^^

I liked this very much, thanks for writing it ^__^

Cee x

I couldn't find anything worth criticizing besides a few odd turns of phrase and some obvious typos. This was excellent. If you can make a compelling story line with this as its basis, I would be your most enthusiastic reader.

liked this : ) very sweet, like your writing style. i see a few grammar errors, such as lack of periods, also this:
"...how she would only listen to Her John and realized that he must now be him."
i think you meant him, heh. regardless, good job!!