 Rosetta Brunestud 2009-11-17 . chapter 7That was really cool *-*
Poor Dean... But Sam's sacrifice was really brave =D They are capable to do anything for each other, isn't they? xD
Kisses and thanks for sharing
Congrats
Rosetta |
 Mistress Sorcha 2009-07-15 . chapter 7That was one of the best Hurt!Dean stories I've read! Bravo!! I loved it. Awesome job, love the fact that it has a basis in a real live haunting. Including RL in a story just gives it that little extra umpf for me. Thanks for sharing this story, looking forward to reading more of your work! |
 Gett 2009-07-11 . chapter 7Great story - loved it that Dean wouldnt shut up even when he was dying. |
 TheKritty 2009-05-28 . chapter 7I so freakin' LOVED this story! It's so hilarious in the beginning, so angsty and full of action later, and tragic and sad a little more later. And love the end, so cute! *squee*
Must say, scalped! and impaled!Dean - that's horrible but I loved it and that's what worries me *lol*. Is that possible, scalping sb like this? *whoa* I had to pull myself together to not let out a little scream *rofl* After chap 4 I was a little bit desperate :)
“I’m fine,” he said automatically, then realized Sam hadn’t said anything. Oops."
--> That little scene was so dean-ish. So fun and so heartbreaking. Love it.
And I so freaked out at the end of chap 6 and hat almost tears in my eyes, seriously. Although I knew that it wasn't a death!fic, it was just...so tragic and just like in the show and so full of angst and. Yeah. You know.
And Sam's sacrifice was really great.
Really, loved this story, was SO fun to read!
Good night *waves*
Greetings from Germany,
Kritty |
 ontara 2008-12-18 . chapter 7OK, read the rest in one sitting - really liked the story, too (except for the scalping - yikes...) but most of all i liked the banter between the brother - really well written...i laughed a lot! (colleagues still think I'm crazy, by the way... ;-))
Some of my favorite lines (couldn't fit all of them...):
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Usually Dean is more “Watch my back while I attack this thing, Sammy.”
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“You need a couple of stitches.”
“Oh, okay.” Dean smiled at him, then glanced at the pile of first aid supplies Sam had laid out. “How many couple?”
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“You have a patch the size of my hand torn loose and it’s cool?”
Dean shrugged and smiled. “At least it’s something new.”
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“This is the part where you say ‘this might sting a little’. I love that.”
“When medical types say ‘this might sting a little’ or ‘you’ll feel a little pinch’ and then they ram something huge into you.
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“Fainting might be a good plan, Dean.”
“Sorry, not a girl, Sammy,
well...great story!
take care! |
 ontara 2008-12-17 . chapter 1Ok, i was going to finish the whole story before i review, but the first chapter just cracked me up completely...so i had to go and tell you right away!
Dean's reaction to the "cuteness" of the town - prizeless...I couldn't quote my favorite line here because i found all of them hilarious (my colleagues think i'm crazy now, by the way; me snickering all the time...).
other than that, i especially loved these lines:
“You’re suggesting we go up where people go stark staring nuts and fling themselves onto pointy things?”
“Uh, yeah.”
“Works for me.”
great - just so in character!
great work. I'm really looking forward to finishing the story now! |
 Dianne 2008-11-28 . chapter 7Thanks for the great story, it was gripping all the way through and the relationship between the brothers was heartwarming. |
 Halcyon Impulsion 2008-11-06 . chapter 2Okay, I can't believe I read this and didn't *quite* review! So here I am again :)
Usually Dean is more “Watch my back while I attack this thing, Sammy.” (hee *grining and nodding*)
Love the misspelled t-shirts! Eew! Scalping! Gross! And probably uncomfortable :) Sam is doing so good here, staying all calm and together lol.
“Feels different.”
“Oh?” Sam asked.
“Yeah.”
“How does it feel different?”
“It feels squishier.” Dean paused.
Everyone grateful to be living in times of serious knock-out drugs during medical procedures not conducted in a bookstore, raise your hand. (Raising hand.)
This chapter looses nothing in the second reading. Still as fab as the first time. Good work :) |
 Soncnica 2008-11-05 . chapter 6“It just keeps getting kinkier and kinkier.” Dean suppressed a cough. “Didn’t know you had it in you.”
My thoughts exactly, LOL.
Okay let's get serious here...
loving this story, I knew it would be worth to waith until you finished it. |
 Soncnica 2008-11-05 . chapter 5I'm loving this story!
hurt Dean is always fun :) |
 Soncnica 2008-11-05 . chapter 4“I might be dying a little, Sammy,” Dean whispered. Sam’s hand closed over his. “Maybe more than a little.”
If this wasn't tragic, I would laugh :) |
 Soncnica 2008-11-05 . chapter 3Puffy is going down! |
 Soncnica 2008-11-05 . chapter 2Scalped?
wow gotta give credit to Dean..he was handling the pain really well.
“Dean? Are you okay?” Sam got his eyes open. “Dean? Answer me, are you okay?”
“Not so much.”
hm, I should better go read the next chapter, right? |
 Soncnica 2008-11-05 . chapter 1“I might die from overexposure to cute, Sam,” Dean grumbled. “It could be fatal.”
hahahhahahahhah, I can see Dean say this...his face...hahahahahahaha :) |
 charis-kalos 2008-11-02 . chapter 7So glad you posted this as one long chapter. I don't know where you would have put the break, but I'm suspecting it would have been one of your evil cliffhangers. Sneaky Sam and his human almost-sacrifice. Dean really needs to look after himself, because little brother is willing to go an awfully long way to take care of him. Love Bobby at the end, too - Bobby just makes everything safe and secure.
Great story! |