Very clerverly written. Mae East? Scarlett O'Mara? Lots of fun with stuff like that. This had me grinning quite a bit as I read it. Nice job.

I really LOVE your stories! Just like a real episode - you always manage to write each single character authentically. Well done! :)

XD

Gotta love Becky.

A thrilling ending! Thank you!

Great story! I could just picture the episode in my head, heehee. :)

Although I'm not one to go into specifics, this is a really good story!

What a let down. _That's_ all they find?!? Nice ref to Throgmorton. Compunction? Good word. Cool! Like in National Treasure! Where's the heat, though? She's like Baloo twice in one day. Amazing! Surreptitious is a good word too. I'd be insulted too. Whale, indeed. (sniffs) ;) Aw... Oh, that's _really_ bad. Liquid assets. Lions and tigers and bears oh, my! Oh, wait. They're already bears. Okay...Lions and tigers and mysterious things, oh, my! Neh, close enough for jazz. I _like_ his name. All right, now hurry up and post again! Hmm... changed their format a little. I wonder if you'll still know that this is my review even though I can't sign a name. Hm...(pretends to ponder) Oh! you have to have a name! You will know after all! Yay! Don't want to confuse people, after all. ;)

Ugh. I agree; one five o'clock is enough. I'd like to hear Charles say "ain't" without being snarky. I agree with Baloo; sleeping in late is _wonderful_. How'd he crush the alarm clock? With his fist? Or did he smash it into the table? Or did he throw it at the wall? I'd probably throw it. Becky's reason is very reminiscent of a parent's "Because I said so" reasoning. Poor Kit. He has to play big brother for a very long time without a break. Love the puns at Malaria. Mr. Bounding is a frog. Hehehe. Snap, slurp, gulp. Where's Lee and Amanda and her family? Oh, oh, I bet Dotty's heading for the shops, right? Methinks Molly would be a Gryffindor. She'd probably even play on the Qudditch team. And she found the Slytherin marble (well, it's green). How ironic. Good thing the treasure can be put in her pocket, or she'd be in a sticky situation in getting back down. Snap, slurp, gulp. (That's just fun to do.) Leave it to Kit to figure that something's up. What color is this marble? Does it go with Hogwarts colors? The bowing's almost as fun as the "snap, slurp, gulp". He was saying? Run, run! I'm running. I'm running! LOL She made them barking mad. Good thing Baloo's always getting into trouble, so he knows how to hide when people are after him, huh? Ow; that sound painful. I think it's quite a distance between Thembria and Cape Suzette. The frozen waterfall sounds pretty. Do you need the colon before "wow!"? What is it? Is it a good "it's...it's" or a bad one? Good work. Loved the puns. Course, I'm just a punny sort of person. ;) Tundra City made me cold. Really. My feet got cold then. All right, update soon! And I mean it!

Wow, awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

And here I was thinking that this would never get updated. Nice to be proven wrong like that. Still you just had to leave on a cliffhanger didn't you? Ah well. Hopefully it'll be sooner for the next chapter to show up because this one was a lot of fun.

...It's...?

SO CRUEL!! XD

Great little story so far. Can't wait for the next part!

Yay! Another fun Tale Spin adventure. Looking good as always.

Cool! The story's interesting, please update.
Really feels like the show too.

That was a good start for the story, update soon

Oh, so _that's_ how they put the swirly color in the middle. LOL WC has luck like mine. Where's all that stuff going to go? H4H isn't that big. TYPO! You need a space between "lamp" and "complete." Famous last words. ;) I love the clock; two refs in one! Oh, I love SMK! Yay! The girls get to have the treasure hunt for a change! Just like Dangerwoman, right? No fair, Ben Gates had to chip it out with a huge Swiss army knife. Her hand goes in...in...in...and then she screams! Oh, right. It isn't the Mouth of Truth, or whatever it is in _Roman Holiday_. Ooh, a Gryffindor marble! I love that name; it's great! Molly's a smartie. A smartie every day. Uh-oh. I don't like that look in her eye. (runs and takes cover behind one of the trees) Good fic! And only one typo (that I caught anyway :D). Good work!