beautiful, beautiful story. I'm glad you extracted the original one. well done.

This is wonderful, simple and poignant. I love your take on the whole Hermione and Snape shipping. I've read the oneshot before this one and had a hard time figuring out what went on (haha, slow) but I'm glad that you've written this one.

Oh hellz yea, that was a perfect ending, i freaking loved it!

Beautiful, how although he didn't have the best of intentions it showed how much he loved her.

Disarming.
=D
I enjoyed your writing style.

id have hit him too.

here

i freakin' LOVE this...story? scene? floater-bit? whatever you call it, it's effing amazing

Oh wow. This was so good. Thanks so much for sharing.

Aw, I love their interactions. I really can't say much else except that I love it.

This is what should have happened. Lovely and brilliant.

Besides, after setting his robes on fire, helping to crack his skull in the Shack, and assorted other attacks, a little shoe isn't that much, is it?

But I don't blame him a bit for getting rid of it...

Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.
I've read a lot of your works, and I have to say this one is by far my favorite. Whereas your other fanfictions are rather, may I say slightly confusing as to what the plot is, this one is very clear and yet beautifully written with "to the point" words and phrases.
It's all very beautiful.
Bravo! I hope to read more from you~~

So sweet... However dark is the underlining theme, the story in itself is really so sweet. Thank you.

A thought-provoking story. After all it's hard to find a good choice during a war. You showed the characters personalities well. they seemed alive. And this conclusion works nicely. thanks.

Oh my god.