That's kinda how I saw it. Loved it!

oh please please continue it! carlisle is one of my 5 fave characters in the series so i would love it if you continued this story! please?

PLEASE continue- carlisle is one of my favorite characters and his history would be fascinating, his mindset and his trials through his existance

I loved this little story. I came on FanFiction today, actually, looking for this exact fic. (Not kidding - I had been thinking about Carlisle's beginning and logged on to find it.) The only thing that I would say to improve is just to add a bit more wording, slow down the situation. A oneshot about feelings or inner thoughts of a character should be slower than one about their actions.

I'd like very much to see more! I'm watching this fic now, don't you dissapoint me. ^_^

That was brilliant! I love your writing style. I like that it wasn't the whole story- because those tend to drag on. This was just the right amount of everything and the ending was perfect. =]