 tyleetty 2009-09-06 . chapter 1i love thisstory, it's so descriptive and interesting! please update soon^-^ |
 Don't Use Anymore. 2009-06-13 . chapter 1Woah, this gives me the chills/ |
 Rika'sGrayWolf 2009-03-12 . chapter 1This story sounds like it would be really fantastic but i'm wondering, are you are going to continue or is it on hold?
-R.G.W |
 Incy Little Spider 2008-12-17 . chapter 1Wow first PPG story to give me the shivers...beatifully creepy especially Blossom's powers going psycho and the excellent ending. Although I sincerly hope you continue this, it is so good as a one-shot that I don't mind if you keep it like this. I commend you for being awesome! |
 Karkadinn 2008-09-18 . chapter 1Delicately twisted and subtly sentimental. It's harder than it seems to make unlikely pairings seem plausible, but you managed it. Would love to read more, but it stands so nicely as a one shot too that it's satisfying as is... |
 AnimeMew 2008-08-24 . chapter 1Damn!
Another awesome idea! ><
Can't wait for more! |
 DeviousAlias 2008-08-24 . chapter 1Now this looks interesting! I love the idea of Blossom's special power killing her like that. The image of it sends chills down my spine (no pun intended, really). It's also cool how Bubbles can now talking to plants and objects (I like the trash can a lot. XD).
Bubbles' uncertainty about her special ability killing at the end was a very nice touch too.
I'm not usually into multi-chaptered depressing stories, but I'll try to stay up-to-date with this one. I really want to see how this goes.
Also, refering to what another reviewr said: I can actually make up a way for Buttercup's 'power' to kill her, strange as that is.
-The Deviant. |
 Kasune 2008-08-24 . chapter 1Neat...and slightly disturbing. Really ain't got much more to say, just...you pull creepy off well. |
 Dracori 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Wow, this is a very interesting beginning. But I can't guarantee that I'll stick with this story. I usually don't like stories that are too dark and sad. Usually if I try to read them, I stop after a few chapters, or I'll never read them again if I even read the whole thing. But I'll try and stick with this story. It does sound interesting.
Cheers, and happy writing!
~Dracori |
 AleMent 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Oh, BubblesxButtercup. Sweet.*favorites* It would be interesting to see Buttercup's powers go whako. It would probably be hard to think of, since her ower is to curl her tounge. Unless(if it happens in the first place), you give her different powers. Anyway, this story hits all the major pinpoints of a good story.
Good grammar,
little to no spelling errors,
good pairing,
original plot, it's got it all. I'll be looking forward to updates. |
 DanielAC 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Since it's just the beginning, there isn't much in this chapter that I didn't already know was going to be in this fic. xD; But whatevs.
I like the idea of Blossom dying. I mean, not because I hate Blossom (which I always SAY I do, but I don't, really) but I just think that one of the PPG not being there any more is an interesting idea. And the way she died was ** up.
I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. I always liked your angsty horror stuff that you used to write, and I'm sure this will be even better than your older stuff because your writing has improved so much. Also INCEST WEE.
Oh. And. There should be a hyphen in "risk taking." 8D;; |