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mari-ness
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
ok i liked that. so...were those fuzzy hand cuffs or just normal?
chiliperrypepper
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
What a cute story! :) LOVE IT! :)
T-Anime93
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
Just some confusion.
Of age is 18, correct?
So at that time, Shikamaru was 15.
At 15, he was sleeping with her and proposed to her.
Slightly odd.
However, the story was very good.
Brains-in-a-nutshell
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
:3 so cute and funny x3 you'd think she'd be exhausted after being awake for so long...XD
xlilyunyun
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
I LOVED IT!
ITS GONNA GO ON MY FAVORITE STORIES LIST~!
Lydia-hime
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
Shikamaru's so creative. Lol!

I didn't remember when Temari's birthday was, but I remember that Shikamaru's is September 22nd. Are you going to do one fore him too?

This was awesome!
ihatewriting
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
You're amazing! Please write more!
Shadow Owner
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Tainted Moonlight, nice diction and humour! The ridiculity and the exaggeration was nicely played with, especially with Kiba, Lee and Naruto getting involved! The characters were well in character, and the effect generated was classic... (I loved the drama and action, especially Temari's reaction to the Konohan antics!)

Thanks for a teasing, interesting, animated read, Tainted Moonlight!
An-Jelly-Ca
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
She closed her eyes. It wasn’t like it was supposed to be, he didn’t get on one knee, he didn’t spout some lovey dovey crap, and he didn’t even bother to ask, but the fact of the matter was, she didn’t care. He loved her and he wanted to marry her and suddenly, nothing else really mattered. Besides, if he had asked the right way, he wouldn’t be the Shikamaru she was in love with. He would be like any other male jerk. “Screw the food.” She muttered, instead moving from her chair to his lip and pressing her lips onto his. “I should’ve known this would work out well. I’m always right after all.”

Shikamaru laughed, kissing her neck. “So you’re previous comments were, what? A slip of the tongue?”

“Naturally.”

roflmao! I loved the ending. Shikatema is amazing! Great story!
Rama Chan
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Aw So LOVELY! I love your fics
kissus
Unices
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
LOL this was funny XD I wonder if the people who gave the embarrising gifts knew what Shikamaru was planning.
A W A I I
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
XD I LOVED THIS!
Temari.fl
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
GREAT FIC!! love how shika slipped the ring on her finger, it was very shika-like!! FAVE!!
LuckyBubbles
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
YAYZ that is ne of the best things I've read in a while MAN I LOVE SHIKATEMA FLUFF sry plz excuse my spastic revews but YAY
TheaBlackthorn
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Perfect i love it!
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