you want a review well I want more story so hurry up and give me more.
Just kidding.
your doing great and I can't wait for more so please hurry

Hey,

I am still reading, and I hope you will let Harry/Luna fix their hurts.
Alan

wow, this is the problem youve written for yourself, if she wasnt going to handle her problems on her own, which we know she can, or she wasnt going to trust Harry to do it, or she didnt believe he could(come on now he handled Tom, Rolf? please...), what do they have?

If she doesnt trust or respect Harry(and his abilities) then there isnt anything for them to build their live together on.

I love Luna normally, but youve written her as a person I dont want within twenty feet of Harry or the kids. Harry deserves more than she seems able to give him. She needs therapy.

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Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

Am i supposed to understand that Harry was told, said he was going off to deal with rolf, and that Luna was more important than any considerations involving rolf; and yet despite this nothing has happened? Nothing has changed? Rolf is still in the house to be a bother?

Why haven't they moved? Why haven't they kicked Rolf the hell out?

If that is the case then It's a weak and pathetic showing on Harry's part. I can understand that Luna might not get things together enough to protect herself, but no one around her has acted decisively to protect her either. It's pathetic, and reading this has left me feeling disgusted.

How are we supposed to have anything but disdain and possibly loathing for Harry if this is all the extent that he will go to to protect someone he cares for.

Yay Fleur! I always liked her.

I liked it!

This makes no sense, why is Luna putting some old guys feelings before her husbands or her children's? SHe either loves harry and puts him first or she doesn't, Harry deserves better than he's getting from her right now, he deserves and has earned her trust.

hey. good story so far. update soon.

I really liked your story until the whole Luna Rolf thing it wrecked the story in my opinion so I didn't even bother reading chapter 10. Nine, good luck with your story I guess.

- Xadro

Good job!

I thought Harry was going to handle business, some dude was manhandling his girl, what's this "truce" B.S.? I wouldve prefered if Luna had handled it herself rather than lapse into some weak kneed damsel.

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Throwing Rolf out as the antagonist so out of left field wasn't as good as say a lone ex-deatheater who was after Harry and used Luna to get him, or after Luna due to a death caused by her during the war.

Still I like the story up to that point.

dennisud

I like how Rolf got 'told' in this chapter, while we see a family forming before our eyes. Wish Hermione & Ron were better friends in this one!

dennisud