Excellent. Time for me to read more, because the suspense is killing me.

LOL!!
cute (in a weird way) ending :D
this was fun to read, yep

“Though you were gonna fix ‘er.”

Supposed to be "thought"?

I liked it. But then again, I always like it.

"Anyway the boys been getting ready to go out, leaving her behind, and she had the usual trouble with the concept of alone, so she took the note from her underwear drawer and set it lovingly on the bed, and then with secrecy had begged Gorgeous to let her play point man, in the plan that wasn’t a plan."

I hate how some of your sentences have to be this long. it ruins the reading at times for me. This is really very good though, leep these stories a' comin'!

Oh poor poor Harley.She wasn't pregnant after all and she thinks that a doll is her baby.What happened to Harley's baby? The real one.Did she have a miscarriage? Or did the baby die after she/he was born? Another thing,the Riddler is not a loser!You can tell that to Mr.J for me.Humph.:p

Wow.Harley is preggers,Batman was in Arkham..as a patient,and the Joker shot Harley again;this time by accident.If Harley won't listen to Ivy about leaving Mistah J,she won't listen to Dr.Leeland either.

Only Harley would think about having the Joker's kids.Or want them.lol.Maybe good help wouldn't be so hard to find if the Joker wasn't always killing the help!Ah Harley,my sweet looney clown princess.:p

This was great! I loved how you captured how insane they both are. This had me snickering the whole way through, and sometimes just laughing outright - especially with the Toys'r'us line. Classic.

Also - your title, your chapter titles, and the poems at the end of the chapters. All wonderful. Kudos to you!

Spiffy. That was crazy great. Keep up the fantastic work!

Ok, very good, I enjoyed it. Just one thing, you said thanks for reading, does that mean the story is over?? because I don't really understand wat happened to Gordon and everything.

Genius. :D :D A follow-up would be greatly appreciated and adored over on this end. Or several.

Also, this made me laugh: "Play-acting is for losers like that Riddler." xD

Again, great work.

warm regards,
dark-hearted rose

Have I mentioned how much I love your Joker/Harley relationship? It's unhealthy, dysfunctional and yet I adore it.


:)

This is great! I love how insane they both are; you really capture their unpredictability and devious little plans. Definitely looking forward to a follow-up!

Gah! Update! Please.

Did you beat me to writing a story where Batsy and the Joker are cell mates in Arkham?


Anywho. Just as interesting and well written as the first chapter. I love how the Commish is being mouthy.

Poor Harley, back in the nut house.


I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. :)