 ll.Schizo.kun.ll 2009-11-21 . chapter 19Please continue! Don't leave it off here! Please? |
 Emberlem 2009-05-28 . chapter 19♥♥Pretty.♥♥
But don't kill off Mello D: In my opinion, he's the hottest guy in DeathNote. And you do portray him sexily. ^^ |
 puddingcup 2009-05-17 . chapter 19NOES!! Matt!!
Near, go save him!
gah!!
please update soon! |
 ZoneRobotnik 2009-05-16 . chapter 19Oh, dang! Poor Mello, I hope he'll be okay! And yay for Near getting there just in time! ...I hope.
Near's gonna be so pissed!
Update, please! |
 ohhai 2009-05-16 . chapter 19Wah! After all this time and all we get is another cliffhanger!! I understand you're bored with DN (I'm not yet), but try and update soon!! |
 Your Silver Lining 2009-05-16 . chapter 19Geez, I thought you gave up on this thing. I've gotten really worried. But I understand that you were getting kind of tired of it. Death Note is, after all, over. But it's still nice to know you're going to finish this. And, man, did you put a twist on it. Poor Mello! And the end kinda left me in confusion. I can't wait for the next chapter so update! |
 YagamiNeko 2009-05-16 . chapter 19Whoa, did not see the ending like THAT. But, I for one, am so glad this is not the end.How will you save them? One way to find out... by the by, is Isak dead or just hurt? I definitally hope dead, sick man... |
 YagamiNeko 2009-04-20 . chapter 18o.0 Oh my gosh! You did NOT just make Matt stab Mello! That is so cruel, to both of them!! I just have to say what a great story this is!! Was looking through all the DN stories and this one stood out to me (mostly because I was curious of the Matt-Near pairing) I'm so glad that I read this though!! I hope you don't leave it like this for long! XD |
 Pinkcandle 2009-03-13 . chapter 18Oh, what's gonna happen next? This story's got a nice pacing for suspense, and I'm loving it~. |
 Ice Puppet 2009-02-25 . chapter 18Oh my god D: Mello! Noo!
Update soon, I love this story! |
 XxDonMelloxX 2009-02-17 . chapter 15lol please don't be mad at meh for waiting until the 15th chapter to review lol I just had to, because.. Well, I hadn't wanted to read this story, to be honest. I'm a MatxMello fan to, like, the death lol but I have been curious about MelloxNear lately.. so I decided it was only fair to torture myself with something MatxNear first as a sort of penance lmfao.
I must say, though, that this is very interesting. Even though you rushed some scenes out of the way, it still fit rather nicely. Of course, I had to comment because I was hoping for some MxM2 fluff to keep me happy. The way you placed it in, though, was very nice.
I'm not a MatxNear fan, and I may never be lol But that will not prevent me from praising this story. You're quite an effective writer, NEAR. Good job with this piece.
-Mello (SheMel's twin~) |
 puddingcup 2009-02-05 . chapter 18oh! this is why you're not supposed to go crazy with a switchblade in your hand!! poor Mello!! he needs to slap some sense into Matt...
Matt, can't you just go back to Near and be "like who gives a damn about them? they're douches and we're going to forget about them"
-sighs- i just know the next chapters will be kinda sad...
can't wait to read the next update! |
 Your Silver Lining 2009-01-18 . chapter 17Oh I can't wait for the sweet revenge! I hope those twins get into a hell of pain. Mello is Russian? Had no clue. Anyway, can't wait for the action! Update soon please.
~Silver |
 puddingcup 2009-01-16 . chapter 17oh naughty, naughty, Matty... what are you up to now, i wonder?
can't wait to read more! |
 AkumuKitty9797 2009-01-11 . chapter 2Aw. . . so sad. . . I feel so bad for Near and Matt. . . T.T
The emotion you portray in this is amazing!
*AK* |