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| Christine Ruud 2007-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseQuite interesting with some very good points! (Especially the educational system...agh...) |
| Missing Whisper 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abusexD xD Gold utter gold. Especially finding it after so long, "As long as they're someone else's." She grew serious "I don't think I'm ready for a baby yet. I certainly don't think bringing a child into this world is something to do lightly, or worse, accidentally. And with our lives, that would be straight up criminal." My my, how times changed xD! Woman wouldn't shut up about kids after s.6! Good job dude. |
| elisaday16 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so great! I think I've read it 12 times now! =) You should write another ,we're reading PhoebeCole fanfics' story! Hope you're fine and have a nice day! |
| Producer's Nemesis 2006-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME! That was really funny! |
| pxc 2006-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseCUTE!! |
| Alyssa Halliwell 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseaw that's so sweet |
| Rogue17 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was cool! *** |
| Leanne8582 2002-11-24 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh. I finally found someone that hates poorly edited fanfiction as much as me. Hallelujah! I also won't read a story if there are multiple mistakes. The authors don't seem to know that typos and mistakes detract for the reading experience. You did forget to mention one thing: Homonym errors. Those drive me completly batty. Thank you for writing this and letting me know that there other people who appreciate the english language. |
| Kitka 2002-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI've always wondered what "fictional" characters might think when reading fan fic, and I think that this fic perfectly fits Cole's and Phoebe's reactions to such stories. In addition, I would also like to humbly request the author's permission to include this on my fan fic/art site, Fantasia at http://fantasia.pulsar.net. Thank you for your time. |
| Army_Angel 2001-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseU need 2 write more.I am also a hopeless romantic and want to see how your mind would solve this ? & how can Phoebe and Cole read their own fan fiction when the world isn't supposed to know about them?Or is it just "don't overthink this story"type and I shouldn't? |
| Bridget McKennitt 2001-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWohoo, my fic got a cameo! ::grins:: No apologies needed on my front. Shaking Shimmers is a fine fic to get your kicks on. Just be warned, I already wrote a semi sequel to that silly ditty...called A Wench's Delight. ;) Loved True Fiction. I've seen similar fics before in other catagories and I've enjoyed each one I read. Great work! |
| Misha 2001-11-18 ch 1, | abuseCute. |
| Cathie 2001-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it. I thought it was cuteand well written. |
| Charming_Becca 2001-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseFinally! Someone comments on the grammer mistakes. I never thought of that as an idea. I mean, I thought of writing about how Phoebe and Alyssa switch and Brian and Leo...... Can you imagine Brian and Alyssa kissing in the Charmed world? Might cause some problems. Oh yeah, really, really, really, good story. Which was the point of my review. |
| Jenny 2001-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abusegood story |