you named Midori after a TV show character. one that was subject to a clip on an adult website. did you know that. the clip was called tight midori, and i shall forever remain anon.

Oh, Emi was a monster, morsters are bad. She got served.

What the fuck?! You tortured Emiliana! I can just picture that in my mind and it scarred me for life.

I think it would've been great if one of the good guys was a spy, I would've loved to see Roxas' face.

I think Emiliana got kicked too much as well, she seemed the best character in my eyes.

Why didn't you kill the goddamn baby? Not enough tradegy, got it memorized?

You are one of the most brilliant writers EVER. This story, Shadows of a Dream and their prequel we're absolutely brilliant. Extremely well written, amazing and original plot, the Disney happily-ever-after even the most sadistic of people are suckers are brilliant for, and an amazing job of keeping the characters in character and having them mature in a good way.

Grammar and spelling were are also very well. Obviously there were a few mistakes - nobody is perfect after all. But, over all well done.

I hope to see more works from you! You are a very talented writer.

Great story!

Ohh! Wonder what Minnie is in a hurry about?

when riku hald the baby it was so funny how the baby dasited to tru up his formila! ha! CANT STOP LAGHING! HA!

I had a fantastic experience today!

I was on the train, going to school, when a friend of my friends joined us. We immediately got along and we started discussing a bunch of things; him, me and our other friend got onto the subject of Kingdom Hearts and, more directly, Ventus. We were discussing our theories on who he could be and this boy said:

"I've read a really good story!" ...and then he proceeded to explain to us Your Ventus! Our friend was nodding in interest, whilst I grinned at him and asked him: "Is that story Shadows of Reality by Krystal Lily Potter?" ...he grinned back and nodded!

I feel quite happy, on the account of this being the very first time I've run into someone who's read the same story as me yet neither of us have given each other the link!

XD, our friend liked your Ventus' connection to Sora and Roxas! And I'm giving her the link to Shadows of a Dream (though depending on how alive she is depends on if she reads it...)

^^", Sorry for the half-randomness of this...but I had to share...! =D

oh man >.< is there a second 1 of Shadow series? is there Kingdom Hearts: Shadows of- and then som other crap XD anyway my q is...is there another 1 for the sequel after this? ...did u get that XD

awesome!

...HOW COULD U MAKE KAIRI PREGNET! just right before the fighting too! shh geeas well all i can say is hope she stays at the chasl with the king and quine.

*applaudes*
so. saad. yet. so. happy *sniiffle*
hahah i almost cried at the ending, SUCH
AN AWESOME WAY TO END THE STORY! haha
mortimor mouse.. i remember watchning the show
house of mouse and he was one of the bad guys.
ah. loved the whole story. awesome job.
hahah i am still in shock about the ending xD way too good!
hahah its almost like how i was when my sis and i finished the game i was like "NO ITS OVER! but... WE BEAT IT... but NOO ITS OVER!" xD =) hope you write another one bye!

this was a great story, and has left me wondering whether or not you're going to post another Kingdom Hearts story

I've enjoyed reading this story incredibly

yours faithfully,
Noble Wielder