 Saphire Skies 2009-10-12 . chapter 3 this last chapter was cute. neji is childish, a bit ooc, but that's what makes this work. |
 Julie 2009-07-28 . chapter 3 I don't think 3 chapters = 10 little moments!
but so far, love it. |
 ELunamoon 2009-01-28 . chapter 3XD It seemed like they were observing him like on those animal nature show things..ya know? |
 ObsessionsGoTooFar 2009-01-21 . chapter 3You enjoy torturing Neji-kun ^^ I enjoy reding it, though, so I can't complain. Nice job so far, I'm looking forward to the rest =3 |
 Musei Kage 2009-01-05 . chapter 3This amused me tremendously; I felt kind of like I was watching one of those discovery channel documentaries...except on the Hyuugas. Or a Geico Gecko commercial >_>
"She didn’t think there was anything that great about a boy who looked like a girl from the back because of his long hair." That's definitely before Tenten realized how soft his hair is ;D Wahaha. Luciously long.
"Maybe it was because Neji had only just discovered that his opponent had managed to cut off a few chunks of his hair during the fight." Lol, I have to say I'm thoroughly enjoying the hair humour! NejiTen crack is the best crack there is. |
 oxsilvermoonxo 2008-12-27 . chapter 1haha!! thats such a cute...(what would this be considered, exactly? its not really a story...a begining? would it be a drabble...? yes? no? idk. nevermind.)
(yes, im back again XD. tell me you missed me :P lol)
BUT this time i wont spam you with reviews, and write a long one (were you the one that suggested that? i forget. but i have spammed a lot of authors with my reviews, lol)
anyways. ch.2- AH! NO!
:( aww. how...*at loss for words*
but it was very nicely done ;) and it was very. very...depressing T-T'
ch.3-
AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! that was great!! XD (i especially like the lines, "...snapped Neji peevishly" and lee "wailing" and "howling piteously")
^^ ah. i hop you do more of i.heart.kakashi's prompts XD lol |
 Elephantie 2008-11-22 . chapter 3haha how cute!
lol poor neji heheh our tenten can be a lil naive huh? |
 SnowNight 2008-10-22 . chapter 2I loved this chapter! So sad, but really well written;)
Im a sucker for tragedies. |
 Lydia-hime 2008-10-19 . chapter 3Hahaha! I love how you wrote this. The way it was set and everything. Teehee. |
 I.heart.Hatake.Kakashi 2008-10-17 . chapter 3i gotta say, YAY on the shortness.. don't have much time... (do we ever anymore?)
omg... i LOVE your "Study" of the Hyuga... so funny!
"she didn't think there was anything great about a boy who looked like a girl" that's so hilarious... hehehe
aw... i love jealously possessive Neji... he's so fun, the best kind of tortured Neji XP
so cute, i loved the ending... loved it! awesome job! |
 half-note 2008-10-16 . chapter 3Haha, Neji. He wasn't that out of character, only a little bit but we all know how he can be possessive, that's just innate to him. He was just acting like the spoiled boy he is. Lolz.
'til next chappie!
Half-note |
 The Sun in the Sky 2008-10-15 . chapter 3Oh wow. I usually don't review until I get to the end, but let me just say... "preening". That was so great!! I literally LOLed. Anyways keep it up! See ya at chapter 9! |
 Lydia-hime 2008-09-16 . chapter 2Wow... that was really sad... But well written I have to admit. Great job. |
 Mara-Lynn 2008-09-02 . chapter 1That was so sad. :( The story was really short but it hit the heartstrings. Hope next one is a happy one! :) |
 I.heart.Hatake.Kakashi 2008-08-30 . chapter 2i shall read before i have to run off to study (I want to finish everything today so i actually get a weekend... rather ambitious, but hey, a girl can hope), so this (and probably the email too) will be a bit shorter than usual)...
that whole descriptive paragraph was awesome... but my favorite part was the ending of it... "panicked white eyes hovering above her"... so prefect.
NO!... omg, that last line was so... wow...
awesome job! LOVE LOVE LOVE! |