I just swooned. This was amazing, and so sweet! Thanks for sharing!

i've read both of your stories for this pairing and your over-all talent at righting short stories is art, pure works of art. i personally would love to see a longer multi-chapter work by you, preferably with this couple because though well thought-out and well written, and yourself being so good with words and imagery i feel after reading that I REALLY want to know what happens next

So lovely (L)

KYAA THIS WAS SOO CUTE, I REALLY HOPE THERE'S MORE TO IT

That was brilliant. A simple, yet meaningful and believable oneshot between two characters not normally paired together. Very well done. I'm almost disappointed that it was only a oneshot story.

how cute

this is cute, kawaii, cool and plain awesome! luv this! though it is a bit of a cliffy since its a oneshot, but, still, its a fave

LOL HAHA THAT IS SO COOL

This was great. I loved Kagome's reasoning behind the questions she asked and how both she and Shikamaru wanted didn't really want to be a part of this tradition. This was really well written and the end was great. Loved this :)

Great story and i hope u can update soon because i want to know what happen next

*giggles* *giggles*

Oh my gosh, that was so adorable 3

I hope u can write more about this story it was reaally great and romatic and i hope u dont give up

That was so cute. I really love it. A sequel perhaps?

Lol the end was funny but I loved how they ended up together :D so cute!