This was my fave chapter of the three. I like that you had what I call the "real Joe" here. He can be a bit of a chauvinist, but I think deep down he really loves her and would admit defeat when necessary. Nice that they finally had a showdown. I've always wondered when it was going to happen. Great set here! I'm on to the next...

yayay infractions, way to go with this, gosh i just love it lime green thong and cap letters all of it, just freakin funny as hell

great job

This whole triology was too cute! You did a great job with the keeping the characters like we know them. Great job!

Love the list if injuries from the boys "discussion". Joe's confession was surprising. Very mature at the end. The part about the medically approved method of giving pills was hilarious! Loved it!

mmm... very cute.

At least they both survived with minimal long-term damage.

Ooo, this was so fun! LMAO

i love there IM conversations ] Also luved Morelli's lack of attitude when she checks up on him in the hospital too lol
great work

toodles

/x

just gobbled up your little trilogy here, and I gotta say I think nurse Stephanie should narate to the rest of the class her upcoming treatment of ranger's pain and swelling. maybe as an aside, or bonus material. it would definitely feel like a bonus.

these were great. I'm sure I'll have lots more feedback for you on your other pieces soon.

;)

sweet story

Terrific! hope there is more!

More classic stuff:

She was an attractive blond with her hair up in a French twist and she had a dreamy, hypnotic expression on her face, not unlike my expression when I’m looking at fresh éclairs.

This made me giggle... a lot... And I love Percocet Ranger lol.

Love it.

"she turned crisply on her white easy spirits and stalked off to do important nursey stuff." LMAO I am almost in tears laughing over this line

Okay, this was great and the messaging was fine. :) I loved this series. :)