 Fullmetal Embers 2009-08-31 . chapter 1Awesome. I always knew Probie was one with the net! |
 Teri 2009-07-27 . chapter 1Very nice! I hope at some point there may be further adventures of your Tony and Tim. |
 Caos Accidentale 2009-05-09 . chapter 1Loved it! It would certainly explain a few things about Tony's "9-lives" when it comes to being blown up and McGee's abilities with all things tech. lol. |
 Saturn's Hikari 2009-04-05 . chapter 1LOVE IT!!
Great premise and a lovely ctossover that kept both Tim and Tony IC.
thankyou! |
 Azamiko 2009-03-28 . chapter 1Hahah, what fun! And I love the comment about how half the stuff he does isn't possible with technology yet! XD |
 Ingu 2009-01-18 . chapter 1Wow, that was cool, a pyrokinetic Tony and a technopath McGee? You should really take this further. Loved it. ^.^ |
 Taura Callisto 2009-01-06 . chapter 1Wow, a very interesting way to make this show a sci-fi. Cute. And controlling fire seems right up Tony's alley. =) |
 Acheron Blake 2008-11-26 . chapter 1This is a truly inspiring story. Such a cool idea that I'm totally shocked that anyone thought of it. Amazingly awesome. Especially Tim and the technopathy. Natural selection. Awesome fic. |
 Hikaru Kosuzaku 2008-11-19 . chapter 1*grins* Hey! I like this! I like this a lot! You could do a whole series on this thing, with everyone else's reactions...*thoughtful look* But that's your decision, of course. Loves to you. |
 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-11-09 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 digiwriter1392 2008-10-19 . chapter 1Too cool!
You think you could continue it?? |
 booklover 2008-10-09 . chapter 1 This is so wonderful in every single way. I love it. So adorable, and amazingly in-character. And if at all possible, I second the idea of an extension. :D This is awesome. Really, one of the coolest stories I've read online, AU, NCIS or not. |
 imaginaryfriend09 2008-08-31 . chapter 1Wow! That's *too* awesome! Could you possibly write more or something else with them using their powers? This is so cool and unique! Great story =). |
 lime juize 2008-08-30 . chapter 1That was GREAT, I loved it! It made my day. Thanks for sharring it. |
 Blue Shadowdancer 2008-08-25 . chapter 1Loved it! Great idea, and Tim controlling the computer with his mind was fantastic! The whole friendship between the two of them was very well written, too. |