This was very nicely done. I think you did beautifully, though both the dialogue and the action taking place, in capturing their personalities. Orihime’s wanting to “have faith” that she means as much to her friends as they do to her, and that tiny little doubt that she has that maybe she doesn’t. And Ulquiorra’s inability to understand why someone would hold out faith in or count on other people. You see this quite a bit in canon and as I said above you did a great job in transmitting that subtext here. You also did a great job with the writing and with building the story to link the prompts.

Very well done,

Astrolabe

I liked it a lot. I the way you portrayed Orihime, very in-character. Her feelings were very believable, very well written overall.

“You can take away my freedom, but please Ulquiorra-sama, don’t take away my faith.” – She whispered and looked at him. ... Ulquiorra just turned around and started walking to the door. He turned the doorknob; it clicked. He didn’t turn around to look at her: "If it makes you feel better to believe that, go right ahead."

These lines were amazing. You really captured both of their personalities well. You also did a great job capturing the emotion in this piece. I loved this story! :)

“You can take away my freedom, but please Ulquiorra-sama, don’t take away my faith.” – She whispered and looked at him.

I loved this. I can totally see Orihime saying it. It's horrible that she has to suffer in Hueco Mundo until they're able to rescue her. She's definitely strong with her heart to survive for so long, and I believe that this fic does some justice in my mind.

~Lin~