ah...pleae update soon. this is good.

more please!

Good Story

Just don't let Sirius die! Harry needs a home!

Excellent beginning! Very creative and interesting!

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great story

I can't wait for more of this... great story, can I have some more please!

ALx

Informative chapter.

I look forward to the next one.

This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.

nice chapter. i like that you are revealing so much so quickly. update soon.

Oh boy do you know how to write a story this is up there with the best of them. Looking forward to more.

An interesting story though awfully dark.

Snape was a Marauder?! what was his form. and dumblydoode killed Siri and remi! hate him now

I TOTALLY wasnt expecting that!!
What an AMAZING plot-twist!!
I actually had a pretty good review all plotted out inside my head, but, well, the SHOCK from the AWESOME ending of this chapter had all thoughts fly from my head, so, please forgive.
Or, better yet, please UPDATE, and soon. Or, you know, soon enough. Once you've got it written should be enough, huh? Wouldnt want to post a four worded chapter because it was all you had yet, right? Because I hate when people reviewed my fic like that before I abandoned it like my sister would abandon a basket of puppies on the side of the road - innocent, too young, and helpless. Poor little fic ... but that wasnt the point. What I mean is that I guess I hated people telling me exactly WHEN to update. Sorry if my enthusiasm for this fic got in the way of my words and made it seem a bit ... bossy? overbearing? too much?
Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that this fic is, like, AMAZING so far, and your choice of character-dumping was definately inspired. Or, you know, close enough for me to think that "inspired" was the best-fitting word there even though it isnt. Just the closest I could come up with for now. Sorry.
AND WOW I'm babbling, sorry about that too. I guess my words get away with me (and, in this case as well, my fingers [typing, da~ling]) when I'm excited. Actually? No guessing about it. But, that should be left for later.
And ... what was the point of this, again, sorry? ... RIGHT:
GREAT fic. Keep it up, if you want too, that is. Because it's that good.
And please, disconsider my ineptitude at writing good reviews as part of this whole thing. I still have good opinions, just bad ways of expressing them. So, yeah. Thanks for the fic. So far it's good. I'm excited for the update, though.
So, until later!!