Well, I really don't want you to delete this story because I like to come back and read chapters for a couple of laughs. This story was great and it was really going somewhere. So I think you should, if you can, just finish the story in one chapter or just leave it the way it is. I understand that you want to do your own work. I got so many laughs from this story that I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Just keep us updated on your profile whenever you publish something. I can't wait to read whatever you write. My pen name is bent05 if you want to contact me. I'm having trouble logging in so that's why I'm not logged in under my pen name. Good luck.

Well that was a total waste of my time! If you aren't gonna finish this story but still gonna leave it up you should at least put on your Summery that you are no longer going to be writing it so people like me who didn't use to follow this story when you were writing it come across it and think its still an ongoing story, start reading it, get caught up in it, and then reach this chapter and realize that the story they liked will never be finished. But whatever, good luck in your writing carrier.

I'm sorry to hear about that..

best of luck with writing! ;)

I hope someday, that I'll get to read a book that is.. written by you LOL? :)

Thanks for everything

well its your choice i guess...but cant you give it to another author to finish? a lot of writers do that.

Thank you for the update and I wish you much success with your writing. For the record I really enjoyed your story and found it gave another insight or side to the Bella /Edward romance.

Thanks for the stories and Good Luck!

Respectfully

Amani

Aw, I'm sad I'll never finish reading the story; it was great. However, I do also understand that you have bigger and better things to be working. I'm happy to hear you're doing what you love. Congrats and best of luck! When you publish (because you're such a fantastic writer, I'm certain you will) please let me know. It would be a joy to read the creativity you put in to your original work. I'm looking forward to it. Keep writing!

Aha

great chapter!

aw!

I really enjoyed this chapter. :D

Ahahah!

Poor Edward. :D

His mother is weird.

Is it Elizabeth or Esme?

Because you didn't say...

fucking lair! you did not have a busy summer, you were just laying on your big fat ass and totally ignoring this story. I would know.

congrats on the nomination, i didn't do it. mostly because i have no idea what the hell you got nominated for.

i loved this chapter! that's all i'm saying.

What if she had asthma? And I hadn’t even thought to ask? Was she going to pass out? Why hadn’t she told me? Unless she didn’t know, or it was something worse, like lung cancer or emphysema.

-Oh Edward. Hahaha.

Great chapter. Definitely transition time.

I love this story. Edward and Bella are so cryptic with each other. They are slowly getting closer, but are holding back their hearts.

Oh the brooding melodrama...I love it! This chapter was good...man Emmett cracks me up! And so does Alice. Can't wait till the next chapter!

thanks! XD

Like where you're heading with this story!

Looking forward to more

I love Edward's internal fighting with himself. I want to fix him so badly. Just make everything all ok so that he can be with Bella and happy and just...yeah happy. Keep up the good work, and please please please fix him!