Is that the end of the story. If so then it was AWESOME. If not then please PLEASE update really soon.
:)

Interesting. Do a What If Stonefur had killed Stormpaw and Feathertail. That would be interesting. I really liked the first one, and the second one.

Good writing,
Marionettes

are you going to continue?
some more what ifs...
how about ...
1) what if leafpool and crowfeather never came back in sunset i think it was. i havent read the books in a while.
2) what if sandstorm and firestar never fell in love.
and one more...
3) what if rusty never accepted the proposel to join thunderclan.
4) oh breainstorm! what if fireheart joined with tigerclaw?
please update soon.

great story, for once I can see what the heck Tigerclaw was thinking.

you should definitely write more like this! I'll be back soon!

scarpath